What are some important qualities of a good supervisor (boss)? Use specific details and examples to explain why these qualities are important.
I think that a good boss rises the efficiency of his employees and a good work depends on a good boss and the way that he behave them. A good supervisor motivate his employees and courage them to hard work in a way that they feel happy and pleased with hard working but a boss who is always angry with his employees and make them to work hard and understate them cannot be as successful as a good boss.
I think a good boss is someone who courage his employees to work hard while they feel happy and pleased. He push them for working hard by giving them rewards and give them fringe benefits with their salary as they work hard and act them in such a way that they are hopeful and they think that they will be successful and reach a high level in their work in future. In another hand they are some bosses that they think that someone who work for them are worthless and make them to work hard in such a way that they feel unhappy and hopeless about their future.
Also a good boss is like a friend with his employees. He ask them about their life and their problems and they can ask him for his helps when they need some. They feel that they work for their friend and so it makes them to feel happy and also when the boss has some problems, they try to help him to solve them. But a bad boss is like a stranger to his employees. They would not help him and he would not help them. They just work to earn money.
All in all, I think a good boss bring happiness and success not only to himself but to everyone that work for him.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 108, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'He' must be used with a third-person verb: 'pushes'.
Suggestion: pushes
...d while they feel happy and pleased. He push them for working hard by giving them re...
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Line 2, column 354, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ul and reach a high level in their work in future. In another hand they are some bosses t...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...happy and hopeless about their future. Also a good boss is like a friend with his e...
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Line 3, column 57, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'He' must be used with a third-person verb: 'asks'.
Suggestion: asks
...is like a friend with his employees. He ask them about their life and their problem...
^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'so', 'while', 'i think']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.148264984227 0.229887763892 64% => OK
Verbs: 0.167192429022 0.158761421928 105% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0851735015773 0.0866891130778 98% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0441640378549 0.046263068375 95% => OK
Pronouns: 0.17665615142 0.0685040099705 258% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.11356466877 0.118717715034 96% => OK
Participles: 0.00946372239748 0.0351676179071 27% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 1.93457130019 2.67179642975 72% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0347003154574 0.0309702414327 112% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0788643533123 0.0887237588012 89% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0157728706625 0.0209618222197 75% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.018927444795 0.0139019557991 136% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1530.0 2387.08602151 64% => OK
No of words: 302.0 408.028673835 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06622516556 5.86048508987 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.48200974243 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.155629139073 0.338922669872 46% => More words length more than 5 chars wanted.
words length more than 6 chars: 0.122516556291 0.251872472559 49% => More words length more than 6 chars wanted.
words length more than 7 chars: 0.0695364238411 0.174417080927 40% => More words length more than 7 chars wanted.
words length more than 8 chars: 0.046357615894 0.112833075102 41% => More words length more than 8 chars wanted.
Word Length SD: 1.93457130019 2.67179642975 72% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 212.727598566 53% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.370860927152 0.524397521467 71% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 35.653361985 59.2087087015 60% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6684587814 58% => OK
Sentence length: 25.1666666667 20.5533526081 122% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.4431524439 48.84282405 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.5 120.699889404 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1666666667 20.5533526081 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.644075263715 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 37.4183222958 45.7405998639 82% => OK
Elegance: 0.69918699187 1.45489161554 48% => Essaays need to be developed more elegantly.
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15999245433 0.300154397459 53% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.202332481799 0.103427244359 196% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.197715755584 0.0752933317313 263% => Ideas in sentences are similar.
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.634690274859 0.497263757937 128% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.242010728122 0.151897553556 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0869828822713 0.114077575197 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362923803977 0.0781384742642 46% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.435539225974 0.336927656856 129% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.139389904652 0.067059652881 208% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123779284362 0.210909579961 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0229618529953 0.0618886996521 37% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8870967742 59% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 7.0 8.42114695341 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 13.6433691756 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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