What is your opinion?
Technology makes people’s lives simpler, while others claim that it makes people’s lives more complicated.
Thousands of years ago, marked by the creation of the steam engine, the first industrial revolution had been exerted to forever change people’s lives positively for the next millions of years. I strongly concur with the idea that technology makes people’s lives simpler now that its benefits intended for humans nowadays are totally visible.
First of all, technology has allowed effective communication through physical devices and online applications. Interaction is no longer challenged by distance and time matters thanks to the invention of modern gadgets such as smartphones, tablets, and computers; therefore, communicative ways have become far more comfortable and convenient. Furthermore, techies have continuously come up with groundbreaking communicative applications namely Facetime, Skype, and Facebook, which allows people around the world to keep contact with each other no matter where and when they are. Gones are the days when people wrote letters and had to wait for days and months for a reply. Current forms of communication are much faster and easier thanks to the development of technology.
Secondly, it is indisputable that technology is an effective means of data storage. A couple of decades ago, it was quite challenging for people to store a large number of documents since the capacity was limited and temporary. However, data storage these days is designed to protect endless documents using the huge memory capacity of smart gadgets. Moreover, the searching process is not time-consuming because the files are tangibly arranged. This time-saving procedure is beneficial to users as it does not require much effort to look for documents. To illustrate, storage devices namely Google Drive and Cloud can save massive data and secure confidential documents for a long time without any trouble.
Finally, technology keeps people updating new information swiftly. Every day, there is a gigantic amount of news that is transmitted to citizens through online articles to meet the need for quick information access. For instance, during the period of quarantine, citizens use the Internet to approach new announcements from the government. By this way, citizens can avoid unnecessary consequences made by accidentally out of date. This proves that at no time is frequently updating heated news unavailable.
In conclusion, technology buttresses people’s lives by allowing them to effectively communicate, store databases, and update information.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 154, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...s quite challenging for people to store a large number of documents since the capacity was limite...
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Line 5, column 139, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tore databases, and update information.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 43.0788530466 37% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2109.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 375.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.624 4.8611393121 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08396973612 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629333333333 0.524837075471 120% => OK
syllable_count: 674.1 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1669986513 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7368421053 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.47368421053 5.45110844103 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176512521103 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0495973362192 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708959514595 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114421448175 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0836614641012 0.0645574589148 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 58.1214874552 61% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.1575268817 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 10.9000537634 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.22 8.01818996416 127% => OK
difficult_words: 134.0 86.8835125448 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.