You are planning to study abroad. What do you think you will like and dislike about this experience
In the modern world studying abroad is a common practice. That is why it is a good chance to learn a new language, meet new people with different cultural backgrounds, and, of course, learn new ideas in the field chosen. But at the same time, with these opportunities there are some inconveniences, because the foreign students must live in the other country, far away from their homes, their parents, friends and in unfamiliar environment.
In my opinion, the major problem with abroad studies is the fact that students needs to live in a totally new environment, without any friends and relatives. Moreover, living in another country can bring about some psychological problems because it can be hard to assimilate in the society there and get rid of the old habits. For instance, one of my friends, a girl, went to study in to Kuwait, and as this country is an Islamic country, she was obliged to wear like their women/as the local women do. wear. At the first sight, it appears that it is not a huge problem, but in fact it is a real pressure for women who are not familiar with these kinds of restrictions. But on the other hand, it was a great chance for her to become a good specialist and understand a new culture.
Moreover, foreign studies are a great opportunity to learn new ideas and, new points of view, which can help people to become a good specialist. That is because, these kinds of studies give a chance to combine the knowledges that the students have from their his own country with the new ones from the country where he or she leaves go to study. For instance, my friend went to Czech Republic to study management, when we were at the second year in our university. , a After a couple of years of studyies , he came back with new ideas and knowledges which were different from ours.
Furthermore, study in another country is an excellent way to study foreign languages. That is because living in another country makes it important to understand the language of the country. That is the best way to understand locals, their culture and at least to understand what they speak about the student himself (who studies there). For instance, sometimes it is very funny when people do not realize that one you can understand their language and speak freely, and the funniest part is to see their faces when you he answers them in their own language.
All in all, studying abroad with its problems is still an efficient way to become a good specialist with broadern mind and knowledge and, deeper understanding of another culture. That is why, I like this kind of experience.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 504, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Wear
...ike their women/as the local women do. wear. At the first sight, it appears that i...
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Line 3, column 516, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...men/as the local women do. wear. At the first sight, it appears that it is not a...
^^
Line 4, column 465, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e at the second year in our university. , a After a couple of years of studyies ,...
^
Line 4, column 467, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...at the second year in our university. , a After a couple of years of studyies , h...
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Line 4, column 504, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... , a After a couple of years of studyies , he came back with new ideas and knowled...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, still, at least, for instance, in fact, kind of, of course, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2137.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 457.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6761487965 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62358717085 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63255843527 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.468271334792 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 652.5 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.0496410176 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.722222222 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3888888889 20.6045352989 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.94444444444 5.45110844103 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130777553746 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0444313057903 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447044823714 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0751580480714 0.150856017488 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0464789267089 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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