you have been told the dormitory room at the university must be share by two students.
would you rather have the university assign a student to share a room with you, or would you rather choose your own roommate?
Sharing a dorm-room or a place in living areas is important and it must be necessary. Because it is ruled by a university managements and almost all students have to choose their roommates. There two types of choosing processes, one of these types is selecting own self and the other type is that assigned by university.
First of all, people of our world have several good kinds of features such as honesty, wealthy. Also, all students want to have a person who has these features. And, some of these students could be stupid, and they might be in poor condition or in any other bad situations. So, some parts of these people who have these bad features could have not been wanted by others. In random selection, people could be faced in these unwanted situations.
In addition, students study a lot and they have so many stresses projects. And, all projects of universities would have been finished in their schedules. Then, all students want to reach a top point of their grades, for good grade they would like to take the project friend who studies with them. If students choose themselves their group members their projects will have been got a perfect result.
Moreover, in dorm-rooms there could be much dirtiness caused by students. And, students would have to cook their meals, clean their places. For working in these facilities their room members should know these activities well. In random choosing students not decide themselves.
In conclusion, taking account of all above advantages of choosing themselves is best solution. I definitely prefer that statement. When I live in the dormitory at the university I want to find my room friend by myself.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 298, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e project friend who studies with them. If students choose themselves their group ...
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Line 9, column 78, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the best'.
Suggestion: is the best
...above advantages of choosing themselves is best solution. I definitely prefer that stat...
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Line 9, column 132, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...on. I definitely prefer that statement. When I live in the dormitory at the universi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, so, then, well, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 1977.66487455 70% => OK
No of words: 282.0 407.700716846 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94326241135 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60684368968 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553191489362 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 618.680645161 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.0288476222 48.9658058833 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.3684210526 100.406767564 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8421052632 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.84210526316 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243948751224 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0802318012426 0.076458572812 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472772073382 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141829769304 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390330811843 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.78 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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