You have enough money to purchase either a house or a business. Which would you choose to buy? Give specific reasons to explain your choice.
Purchasing a house or a business has its advantages and disadvantages. However, If somebody would give me an opportunity of either buying a house, or my own business I would prefer the second. I feel this way, because of three reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, purchasing a business instead of a house maybe a hard but beneficial decision. Although buying even an established business can be risky, which can afford lots of opportunities in the future. For instance, unlike usual work, it is possible to work without schedule, sufficiently increase a profit, or to be more independent, compared to common jobs. Moreover, we are not anchored to one place anymore. With the growth of the internet it has become easier to work from any place in the world.
Secondly, acquiring a business gives the opportunity for realization personal projects instead of somebody’s else. There is nothing more exciting than to create, build, or to produce anything desirable. My friend’s experience is a compelling example of this. When he was young, he always wanted to create his own web development company, but he had’t enough money to start, so he was forced to work on a regular job. The job wasn’t bad, but boring, and lack of opportunities to use imagination. As a result, my friend was stressed out and felt empty. But when he managed to find sources for his own company, his life changed significantly. Self-realization is a vital benefit of having a private business.
Finally, needless to say that business acquisition is an investment, which can become highly profitable at the end. None of the existing jobs can afford a salary more than a million dollars per month. In contrast, a profit of a private business is limited only by your imagination. Eventually it can help one even buy a house.
In conclusion, I am the opinion that the purchase of a business is more beneficial than the purchase of a house. I think so because it gives you lots of opportunities, ability to create your own projects and the potential to earn as much as you want.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, as for, for instance, i feel, i think, in conclusion, in contrast, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1747.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 357.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89355742297 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07598993779 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565826330532 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.5016725255 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.4090909091 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2272727273 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.40909090909 5.45110844103 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167247845956 0.236089414692 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0416336012683 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500657562254 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0995431810023 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0660784702914 0.0645574589148 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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