Young people enjoy life more than older people do.
Do you agree or disagree?
In today's fast moving world everyone want a life which is full of excitement and is very lively. Today's job markets and business require individuals to work even harder as compared to few years back but at the same time current generation or the young people know how to enjoy life. I agree that young people enjoy life more than older people. Everyone has its own way to enjoy life but some of the common ways people enjoy life is travelling, involve in some activity which he/she loves etc. There are many reasons as to why young people enjoy life more than the older people.
First, when we are young, in majority of the cases we are healthy and fit. Being hale and hearty is very important to enjoy life. If one has to travel to explore different places and is not physically fit then there are many problems which one has to face and in turn people become reluctant to travel places. As people grow old there are many health restrictions due to which older people cannot enjoy life as young people can do. For example, when our family planned a trip one of my uncle couldn't come as he has a heart problem and doctors have not allowed him to travel.
Second, young people do not have much responsibilties as compared to old people. For example, older people has to take care of their children, earn money for stable life and also have different work responsibilties. But when people are young, they don't have any liabilities and are free to do what they want. The old people do not enjoy life to that extent as they have to fulfill other responsibilites due to which they cannot enjoy life to that extent.
To sum up, I feel that as we grow old there are many health restrictions and also increased responsibilites which stops us from enjoying life to some extent. Hence young people enjoy life more as compared to older people as they are healthy and fit and do not have many responsibilities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, second, so, then, as to, for example, i feel, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 344.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5988372093 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44352103006 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.462209302326 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 508.5 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9014410767 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.875 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.500086593685 0.236089414692 212% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.210610163605 0.076458572812 275% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.177389021031 0.0737576698707 241% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.335606876306 0.150856017488 222% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512206794119 0.0645574589148 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.97 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 86.8835125448 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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