In your opinion, what is the most important characteristic (for example, honesty, intelligence, and a sense of humor) that a person can have to be successful in life?
Frankly, it seems among so many qualities that a person should have to be successful in his life, very difficult to prefer one to another because each characteristic has its unique advantages. For example, a person who has a sense of humor can help other people smile so he can make new friends and be successful. But from my point of view, intelligent people are the most successful persons in their lives. In the following paragraphs, I will try to explain my position more clearly.
First and foremost, intelligent students can solve challenges easily and in a more convenient way. For example, if they face a new problem in school, they will find creative solutions for it. Furthermore, they always learn new materials quickly and obtain the highest grades in classes. Smart students usually continue their education in high-ranked universities and get in touch with prominent professors.
In the second place, after graduation, they work in outstanding companies and corporation because most employers would like to hire intelligent people. Some smart persons prefer to run their own business. They know that what is the best time to buy stocks in markets or sell them. So that they can get a huge amount of money in a limited time. Additionally, intelligent persons benefit from more self-confidence and they accept critiques very well. These people use critiques to improve their working environment and eliminate their weaknesses.
Last but not least, smart persons have more friends because all people would like to benefit from their knowledge. They usually have no difficulties finding a good spouse because they are more attractive.
Taking all the aforementioned arguments into account, it can be concluded that smart persons are the most successful people in the world based on the reasons which I outlined above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, frankly, furthermore, if, second, so, well, for example, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1541.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 297.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18855218855 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86630289333 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589225589226 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9208449108 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6470588235 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4705882353 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.17647058824 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228535401071 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662464594055 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709019275112 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130170768822 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0931291476152 0.0645574589148 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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