Altruism
Altruism is a gift you can give to yourself. The main idea is helping others and pay attention to strangers’ life to help them in severe situations. By enhance the altruism in yourselves, you learn how to communicate correctly. As a consequence it improves others’ demeanors to you. Increasement of this trait in a society will show up features such as sympathy and kindness spread, one can defend against devil’s temptations and number of poor people go less.
Altruism is in the humans and animals’ life. When a person share his food with a hungry stranger or buy one for him, it is a sample. Intended subject could have higher value like a body organ. Someone may donate a kidney for buy another’s life. Animals have that too, meerkats have a sentinel who watches for a predator whilst others enjoying their food. The sentinel eat at last and put its life in danger for guaranteeing its mates’ lives. If an animal attack them the sentinel is alone, so risk percentage to get caught is higher.
In contrast some studies showed the sentinel eat completely first then standing as a guard next to the safe place to look after others. If a threat happen it will alarm others and run into the safe zone. After alarm eating group of meerkats gather or move away quickly, so draw the predator’s attention away from the caller, therefore increase the sentinel’s chance to escape. In humans altruism’s story the one who donate a for example a kidney receives appreciation from society and rises self-worth.
Altruism is an important fact to be considered in the normal life. Magnitude of sympathy and welfare increase with that and affect in all creators lives. You can pass hazardous situation in group life by altruism. You take care of your relatives and they take care of you, a simple hint to success in individual’s hard times.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: contrast,
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, may, so, then, therefore, for example, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 7.30242825607 164% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 12.0772626932 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 22.412803532 103% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 30.3222958057 135% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1575.0 1373.03311258 115% => OK
No of words: 317.0 270.72406181 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96845425868 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.04702891845 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97811513543 2.5805825403 115% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 145.348785872 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605678233438 0.540411800872 112% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 419.366225166 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.23620309051 36% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.25165562914 399% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 13.0662251656 153% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 21.2450331126 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.2938926552 49.2860985944 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.75 110.228320801 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.85 21.698381199 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 7.06452816374 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 4.33554083885 300% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181830534136 0.272083759551 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796306936846 0.0996497079465 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124591493043 0.0662205650399 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124978271772 0.162205337803 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056177827235 0.0443174109184 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.3589403974 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.8541721854 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.0289183223 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.2367328918 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.42419426049 98% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 63.6247240618 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.7273730684 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.498013245 76% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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