The article introduces the topic of endotherms creatures. More specifically, in regard to the passage, the writer puts forth the idea that dinosaurs were endotherms.
Integrated essay
The article introduces the topic of endotherms creatures. More specifically, in regard to the passage, the writer puts forth the idea that dinosaurs were endotherms. In the listening passage, the lecturer points out that there are some serious flaws in the writer's claims. In fact, the professor believes that there is no sufficient evidence to consider dinosaurs endotherms and addresses, in detail, the trouble with each point made in the reading text.
In the reading, the author begins by stating that, because fossils of dinosaurs were found in the polar regions with extremely cold climate, it can be concluded that to maintain the temperature of the body these creatures should have been endotherms. This specific argument is challenged by the lecturer. He claims that earlier the climate in this area was much warmer than it is nowadays. Additionally, he mentions that when the climate became colder dinosaurs could have migrated to other places. So the conclusion made by the author of the reading passage is not proved.
Secondly, the author suggests that the placement of legs underneath the body of dinosaurs could prove the theory that they were endotherms. In the article, it is said that this composition of legs is suitable to perform energy-consuming activities such as running. And since all modern endotherms can run, it is reasonable to assume that dinosaurs also were endotherms. The lecturer, however, asserts that the main purpose of such a structure of body should be to support the enormous size of these creatures.
Finally, another reason why the author feels that dinosaurs were endotherms is that their bone structure contained the Haversian Canals that are the characteristics of the bones of endotherms. The professor in the listening passage provides us with a counterargument that there is evidence that the speed of growth of dinosaurs was inconstant. This proves that the growth rate was adapted to external factors such as temperature, that could not happen if they were endotherms
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...each point made in the reading text. In the reading, the author begins by stati...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the enormous size of these creatures. Finally, another reason why the author f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, however, if, second, secondly, so, in fact, such as, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 10.4613686534 220% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 7.30242825607 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 20.0 12.0772626932 166% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 22.412803532 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 30.3222958057 135% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1724.0 1373.03311258 126% => OK
No of words: 327.0 270.72406181 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27217125382 5.08290768461 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88569989524 2.5805825403 112% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 145.348785872 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51376146789 0.540411800872 95% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 419.366225166 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 3.25607064018 246% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 2.5761589404 233% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3906224774 49.2860985944 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.75 110.228320801 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4375 21.698381199 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06452816374 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.27373068433 211% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332025666542 0.272083759551 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0981927471155 0.0996497079465 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106680379824 0.0662205650399 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18952718962 0.162205337803 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125107864511 0.0443174109184 282% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.3589403974 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.8541721854 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.0289183223 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.2367328918 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.42419426049 106% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 63.6247240618 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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