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Both the reading and the lecture are talking about cons and prof of letting the people work only four days per week. The passage states that this will benefit the companies and the employees as wee. It gives three reasons to support this idea. However, the lecture opposes the statement made in the reading part. It says that working four days in a week will bot benefit the companies.
To begin with, the author of the reading says that if the individuals will work only four days, they be more productive because they will feel less tired. He claims that the company can hire more people in order to reach the same amount of work. This particular reason, is challenged by the professor of the lecture. He said that, if they work less days the company will be forced to hire new people, and this will cost more to the employeers. He said hiring new people is costly, they will need to mpay for training and health benefits. He said the health benefits remain the same either if you work four days or five days. Moreover, adding more people means more office space and more computers.
Furthermore, the reading part supports the idea that the country will benefit as well, because it will reduce the unemployment rates. It says that more jibs will be available where individuals can apply. Yet, the listening part disputes this idea. It says that reducing the work days does not allow more jobs available. It says that because it is so costly to get new workers, the companies may ask the people to work overtime to reach their goals.
Finally, the author of the passage says that the employees will have more time to spend with their families and have better quality of life. On the other hand the lecturer said that more free time will increase the risk that employees will reduce their quality of work. Also, they will be the first to loose their jobs in the economy cutdown.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 111, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tting the people work only four days per week. The passage states that this will ...
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Line 1, column 288, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...wever, the lecture opposes the statement made in the reading part. It says that w...
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Line 2, column 345, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun days is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...the lecture. He said that, if they work less days the company will be forced to hire...
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Line 2, column 539, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... mpay for training and health benefits. He said the health benefits remain the sam...
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Line 4, column 303, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...f work. Also, they will be the first to loose their jobs in the economy cutdown.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, talking about, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 5.04856512141 357% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 22.412803532 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 30.3222958057 89% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 1373.03311258 113% => OK
No of words: 336.0 270.72406181 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60119047619 5.08290768461 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.04702891845 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.13785792511 2.5805825403 83% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 145.348785872 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.473214285714 0.540411800872 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 465.3 419.366225166 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 3.25607064018 399% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 13.0662251656 153% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.8086466232 49.2860985944 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.3 110.228320801 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 21.698381199 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06452816374 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 4.33554083885 208% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.272083759551 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0996497079465 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.162205337803 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.3589403974 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 53.8541721854 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.0289183223 65% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 12.2367328918 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 8.42419426049 84% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 63.6247240618 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.7273730684 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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