Comics medium. Summarize the main points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they challenge the specific points made in the reading passage.

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Comics medium. Summarize the main points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they challenge the specific points made in the reading passage.

The reading and the lecture are both about the same topic, which is “the comic medium”. The author of the reading believes that comics strips are a truly american art form. The lecturer casts doubt on the claims made in the article. He thinks that comic is not “a uniquely american’s form of art”, is an art that belongs to the whole world.

First of all, the author points out that Hogans’ Alley was the first comic in the world. The problem with this idea, according to the lecture, is that the mentioned comics strip is from 1890, and the comic format was already famous in Europe by 1790. Furthermore, he argues that the author of Hogan’s Alley was an inmigrant, and so the characters were.

Secondly, the author refers to Action Comics and the wellknown superhero named Superman, as an example of how truly american are the comics. The lecturer rebuts this argument mentioning that the artist behind of Superman is from Canada. He elaborates on this by mentioning that Tin Tin was extreamely famous, sixteen years after than Superman appears on scene.

Finally, the author states that, Manga -Comic form invented in Japan-; and european comics, for instance, Asterix, has their own influences form the traditional arts practices in the territories that watch them born.

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Average: 8.3 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 184, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...s strips are a truly american art form. The lecturer casts doubt on the claims made...
^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... art that belongs to the whole world. First of all, the author points out that...
^^^^
Line 9, column 279, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: Tin
...e elaborates on this by mentioning that Tin Tin was extreamely famous, sixteen years af...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 22.412803532 80% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 30.3222958057 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1114.0 1373.03311258 81% => OK
No of words: 217.0 270.72406181 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.133640553 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 4.04702891845 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61058179209 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 145.348785872 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585253456221 0.540411800872 108% => OK
syllable_count: 333.0 419.366225166 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8474282752 49.2860985944 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.272727273 110.228320801 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7272727273 21.698381199 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06452816374 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119485561981 0.272083759551 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0497115792536 0.0996497079465 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392886335536 0.0662205650399 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0627302737216 0.162205337803 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375520894705 0.0443174109184 85% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.3589403974 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.8541721854 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.2367328918 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.42419426049 108% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 63.6247240618 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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