establishing colonies and traveling to Asteroids and some problems of that
The text discusses traveling on Asteroids and provides three reasons to support the idea of establishing colonies on them. On the other hand, the professor goes against stated claims and by providing some contradictory information, explains why he believes this idea is not practical.
First, the text claims that Asteroids have lower gravity, and it makes landing of spaceships easy. it also states that these space vehicles will take off easy as well, and as a result, do not need lots of fuel. In contrast, the professor states that although Asteroids have lower gravity, but this can cause its own risks. He mentions that as the researches, people by living in low gravity planets, will loose their muscles and bone density which make some serious health problems for them in the long run.
Second, the author states that Asteroids have valuable metals, which spaceships can bring them to the earth, and it will make the space travelings profitable. On the other hand, the professor refutes this point and states that there is no doubt that Asteroids have some precious metals which may make space travelings profitable, but we should not forget about the cost of transporting these metals to the earth. He adds that we also cannot make sure that these metals remain the same when they arrive to the earth. Moreover, the increase in amount of these expensive metals will eventually lead to a decrease in their market price, which is another problem of the claim made by the author.
Third, the text explains that Asteroids get closer to the earth in part of their orbit cycle, and it can make them easy to reach. The professor casts doubt on this claim and mentions that most of Asteroids have unique and orbit patterns. He also includes that most of the Asteroids get close to the earth in part of their orbit patter, but get far more away from the earth in the other part of their orbit. We can also hear from him that the change in the orbit pattern of these Asteroids is the thing which can make the traveling to them challenging.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 100, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...nd it makes landing of spaceships easy. it also states that these space vehicles w...
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Line 3, column 406, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
... by living in low gravity planets, will loose their muscles and bone density which ma...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, may, moreover, second, so, third, well, in contrast, no doubt, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.4613686534 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 5.04856512141 257% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 7.30242825607 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 12.0772626932 157% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 22.412803532 205% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 30.3222958057 142% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1693.0 1373.03311258 123% => OK
No of words: 355.0 270.72406181 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76901408451 5.08290768461 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.04702891845 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36113475891 2.5805825403 91% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 145.348785872 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.467605633803 0.540411800872 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 503.1 419.366225166 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 7.0 1.51434878587 462% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 21.2450331126 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0360717378 49.2860985944 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.928571429 110.228320801 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3571428571 21.698381199 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92857142857 7.06452816374 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226183688669 0.272083759551 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0815509343828 0.0996497079465 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0751413916624 0.0662205650399 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145289745927 0.162205337803 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559836476608 0.0443174109184 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.3589403974 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 53.8541721854 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.2367328918 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.42419426049 90% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 63.6247240618 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.498013245 114% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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