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In the reading, the author claims that buying a franchise which is a license issued by a large and famous company is much sensible than starting own independent business by pointing out 3 reasons of support. However, finding all the reasons questionable and implausible, the lecturer repudiates the claim, and based on a recently conducted study she presents some evidence to the contrary.
At first, the author argues that the approach of buying a franchise help franchise owners to find reliable suppliers for their needed goods and services. Conversely, the lecturer brings up the idea that in many franchise contracts the owners should supply their needs from a very specific goods and services. Owing to the fact that if owners are allowed to buy their raw material or maintenance service from the market, they will find them with cheaper price. Hence, the reason presented in the passage not only is not helpful but also it charges more cost.
In addition, the reading passage holds the view that franchise can save a new business a considerable amount of money on advertising. That being said, the lecturer disputes it by clarifying the fact that franchising companies earn about 6 percent of the profit from each franchise buyers and it is a quite lot of money. Moreover, they do not advertise for the owners yet they just advertise their brands; thus, many other businesses and places are there and may benefit from it. Should owners invest half of the money which they give companies, they will return back more profits.
Finally, the author draws attention to the security of the job as the last advantage for supporting the claim that buying a franchise is much better. Yet again, the lecturer dismisses it by pointing out that there although the security in buying a franchise is more than launching an independent business, there is a third option which is not mentioned in the passage. The new owners can buy a business from a previous owner. In this case, the chance of success is twice greater than purchasing a franchise.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 298, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('quite') instead an adjective, or a noun ('lot') instead of another adjective.
...it from each franchise buyers and it is a quite lot of money. Moreover, they do not adverti...
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Line 3, column 555, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'return'.
Suggestion: return
...ey which they give companies, they will return back more profits. Finally, the author dra...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, finally, first, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, third, thus, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 7.30242825607 164% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 22.412803532 116% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 30.3222958057 122% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1700.0 1373.03311258 124% => OK
No of words: 345.0 270.72406181 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92753623188 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.04702891845 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61203650809 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 145.348785872 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539130434783 0.540411800872 100% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 419.366225166 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 11.0 8.23620309051 134% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 21.2450331126 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3726632614 49.2860985944 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.428571429 110.228320801 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6428571429 21.698381199 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 7.06452816374 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 4.33554083885 208% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.272083759551 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0996497079465 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.162205337803 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.3589403974 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 53.8541721854 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.2367328918 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.42419426049 101% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 63.6247240618 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.7273730684 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.498013245 110% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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