The passage states that some foods are endowed with super powers that gives more energy and protection against disease. The author in passage contends this by giving examples of different foods, their benefits on health and from diseases which they protect. While, the speaker says that certain foods having super powers might be a bit of exaggeration. However, the speaker argues this by refuting each of the examples by stating some facts and explanation.
The passage states that researches on mice and rats have indicated certain benefits of consuming blueberries. These benefits include positive effect on brain function and motor movement along with immunity against Alzheimer's disease. The passage also says eating one cup of blueberries everyday will help in reducing aging problems. The speaker says that results and benefits shown on animals like rats and mice will not show benefits on humans.
Finally, the speaker says that eating foods like tomatoes cannot guarantee that the person is not going to get cancer. Also ,eating broccoli and cabbage might reduce the risk of colon cancer but it may not necessarily prevent colon cancer. He also states that researches have shown that consuming garlic might reduce cholesterol for first three months but does not show any any major decline after six months. At last, the speaker warns about being careful to scientific facts and evidences.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 166, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...uthor in passage contends this by giving examples of different foods, their benef...
^^
Line 1, column 260, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...h and from diseases which they protect. While, the speaker says that certain foods ha...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 404, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the speaker argues this by refuting each of the examples by stating some facts an...
^^
Line 3, column 287, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...also says eating one cup of blueberries everyday will help in reducing aging problems. T...
^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 124, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... person is not going to get cancer. Also ,eating broccoli and cabbage might reduce...
^^
Line 6, column 353, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...educe cholesterol for first three months but does not show any any major decline ...
^^
Line 6, column 373, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: any
...r first three months but does not show any any major decline after six months. At last...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, may, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.4613686534 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 22.412803532 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 30.3222958057 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1184.0 1373.03311258 86% => OK
No of words: 224.0 270.72406181 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28571428571 5.08290768461 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.04702891845 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36598719527 2.5805825403 92% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 145.348785872 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598214285714 0.540411800872 111% => OK
syllable_count: 360.0 419.366225166 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.7847742446 49.2860985944 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 98.6666666667 110.228320801 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 21.698381199 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06452816374 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.09492273731 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 4.19205298013 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0839105350112 0.272083759551 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0357340013751 0.0996497079465 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061937323992 0.0662205650399 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0581201793907 0.162205337803 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482381666164 0.0443174109184 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.3589403974 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.8541721854 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.2367328918 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.42419426049 101% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 63.6247240618 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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