In the lecture, the professor states several points about a lady portrait painting done by the famous dutch painter Rembrandt. He argues that the work was created by the painter himself and not by anybody else so should not be removed from the official catalogue. However the author of the passage contends that the style and demonstration does not represent the work by Rembrandt. The professor's lecture cast doubt on the reading by several points.
Firstly, the professor claims that on x ray analyses it was found that the cap which resembles to a servant model was painted 100 years later by somebody. Accordingly the original work by rembrandt was being used by somebody else and they added the cap to the original aristocratic lady picture. This is not what the reading states, it says that the dressing style is not consistent with the work by the famous painter since he was attentive about this kind of work. The lecture casts doubt on this by blaming the addition by someone else.
Secondly,the face of the portrait shows reflection because of the light colored cloth worn below it.The lecturer claims that originally it was a light fur collar that was been painted below the face. In contrast the reading states that a dark fur collar was painted which should result in shadowed picture rather than a bright face as seen in picture. This point is contradicted by the lecturer that someone else altered the light fur collar to a dark one which was revealed in the x ray analysis.
Finally, the lecturer says that the painting was done on a single piece of wood. Likewise, it was the wood from same tree used by the painter to do his self portrait. But the passage explains that the painting was done using several pieces of wood being glued together. This casts doubt on the lecturer who details that the picture was later enlarged by using panels of wood pieces added on top and sides.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...al points about a lady portrait painting done by the famous dutch painter Rembran...
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Suggestion: However,
...be removed from the official catalogue. However the author of the passage contends that...
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...oubt on the reading by several points. Firstly, the professor claims that on x ...
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Suggestion: x-ray
... Firstly, the professor claims that on x ray analyses it was found that the cap whic...
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Suggestion: Accordingly,
...as painted 100 years later by somebody. Accordingly the original work by rembrandt was bein...
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... blaming the addition by someone else. Secondly,the face of the portrait shows ...
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...e addition by someone else. Secondly,the face of the portrait shows reflection b...
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Suggestion: The
...f the light colored cloth worn below it.The lecturer claims that originally it was ...
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Suggestion: was; has been
...iginally it was a light fur collar that was been painted below the face. In contrast the...
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Suggestion: contrast,
...hat was been painted below the face. In contrast the reading states that a dark fur coll...
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...result in shadowed picture rather than a bright face as seen in picture. This poi...
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Suggestion: x-ray
...to a dark one which was revealed in the x ray analysis. Finally, the lecturer sa...
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...ch was revealed in the x ray analysis. Finally, the lecturer says that the pain...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, finally, first, firstly, however, likewise, second, secondly, so, in contrast, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 10.4613686534 191% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 12.0772626932 132% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 22.412803532 120% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 30.3222958057 148% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 1373.03311258 114% => OK
No of words: 332.0 270.72406181 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72289156627 5.08290768461 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39418993592 2.5805825403 93% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 145.348785872 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.463855421687 0.540411800872 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 477.9 419.366225166 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7963766332 49.2860985944 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.533333333 110.228320801 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1333333333 21.698381199 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.93333333333 7.06452816374 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 4.19205298013 310% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.39527281275 0.272083759551 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136579420071 0.0996497079465 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707057887341 0.0662205650399 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.244069058498 0.162205337803 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304257233185 0.0443174109184 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.3589403974 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 53.8541721854 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.2367328918 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.42419426049 90% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 63.6247240618 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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