The passage makes some reasons about the fact that dinosaurs are endothermic. On the contrary, the professor presents some reasons that rejects this concept.
Firstly, the passage presents some evidences that shows dinosaurs are occupied in the polar regions in which the temperature is vary cold. According to the speaking passage, previously, the polar regions was not as cold as those are today. Despite the fact that the polar regions were cold in that days, the dinosaurs were not able to move in warmer places.
Secondly, the passage states the fact that there is a connection between endothermic and the position and the movements of the legs. In other words, the will be efficient, if animal legs are positioned underneath. On the contrary, the professor believe that the legs position significantly depends on the weigh of the of the early dinosaurs so it does not prove the endothermic characteristic. For example, the dinosaur require legs in underneath to carry the heavy body.
finally, the passage states a fact about Hanoverian canals that is a structure inside of these species. these canals allow the animal to grow quickly and this characteristic also is an important feature in endothermic. The professor thinks that these evidences are not strong enough. Despite the fact that these canal are exists, the evidences shows the fact that in some periods the dinosaurs will grow less and in some periods these dinosaurs act reversely.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 129, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'varied'.
Suggestion: varied
...lar regions in which the temperature is vary cold. According to the speaking passage...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ere not able to move in warmer places. Secondly, the passage states the fact th...
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Line 6, column 312, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'of the'.
Suggestion: of the
...tion significantly depends on the weigh of the of the early dinosaurs so it does not prove th...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Finally
...underneath to carry the heavy body. finally, the passage states a fact about Hanove...
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Line 8, column 105, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: These
...is a structure inside of these species. these canals allow the animal to grow quickly...
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Line 8, column 307, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this canal' or 'these canals'?
Suggestion: this canal; these canals
...ot strong enough. Despite the fact that these canal are exists, the evidences shows the fac...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'finally', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'for example', 'in other words', 'on the contrary']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.232824427481 0.261695866417 89% => OK
Verbs: 0.141221374046 0.158904122519 89% => OK
Adjectives: 0.087786259542 0.0723426182421 121% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0572519083969 0.0435111971325 132% => OK
Pronouns: 0.00381679389313 0.0277247811725 14% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.125954198473 0.128828473217 98% => OK
Participles: 0.0152671755725 0.0370669169778 41% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.73062617765 2.5805825403 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0152671755725 0.0208969081088 73% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00154638098197 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.198473282443 0.128158765124 155% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00763358778626 0.0158828679856 48% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0152671755725 0.0114777025283 133% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1460.0 1645.83664459 89% => OK
No of words: 237.0 271.125827815 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.16033755274 6.08160592843 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.04852973271 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.350210970464 0.374372842146 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.299578059072 0.287516216867 104% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.20253164557 0.187439937562 108% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.147679324895 0.113142543107 131% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73062617765 2.5805825403 106% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 145.348785872 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.472573839662 0.539623497131 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 42.5650856065 53.8517498576 79% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0529801325 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.2307692308 21.7502111507 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7567389271 49.3711431718 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.307692308 132.220823453 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2307692308 21.7502111507 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.846153846154 0.878197800319 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 3.39072847682 177% => OK
Readability: 48.1885751379 50.5018328374 95% => OK
Elegance: 1.84905660377 1.90840788429 97% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.562917538166 0.549887131256 102% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.159724260379 0.142949733639 112% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0777808001293 0.0787303798458 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.684328974992 0.631733273073 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.13817707832 0.139662658121 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.2826423268 0.266732575781 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0801439814835 0.103435571967 77% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.463702740958 0.414875509568 112% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.034451265693 0.0530846634433 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.408169515265 0.40443939384 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0908484972886 0.0528353158467 172% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.26048565121 188% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 3.0 3.49668874172 86% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.62251655629 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 7.0 3.1766004415 220% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 10.2958057395 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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