The reading passage and the lecture both talk about the ecocertification of the American company where the reading shows ecocertification has no good effect on customer but the lecture oppose the reading passage.
First, the lecturer suggests that the American customer, obviously, don’t treat every advertisement exactly same ways. Since the American customer have mentality to separate the good or bad advertising for product, they might keep their trust on ecocertification advertisement at the same time show up a friendly behavior to the ecocertification provided company.
Second, the lecturer says that it is very natural that everybody pay attention on the prices, but if the prices differences remain between 5% then the customer might choose the good product although it has higher price. So the lecturer is very much confident that the American customer wants to buy the ecocertified wood product rather than normal wood product.
In the last, Lecturer mentions that, the American company must provide attention about their business on own country and the abroad also. Because if they do not care about their own customer then in this competing world, the other company from abroad will take the advantage that they will start their own business in America and if that happened then it would be worse for the whole Americans.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 133, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
... business on own country and the abroad also. Because if they do not care about thei...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 10.4613686534 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 22.412803532 80% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 30.3222958057 63% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1143.0 1373.03311258 83% => OK
No of words: 214.0 270.72406181 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34112149533 5.08290768461 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 4.04702891845 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84725190182 2.5805825403 110% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 145.348785872 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579439252336 0.540411800872 107% => OK
syllable_count: 360.9 419.366225166 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 13.0662251656 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 21.2450331126 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.1236995244 49.2860985944 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 163.285714286 110.228320801 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5714285714 21.698381199 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 7.06452816374 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.375856368356 0.272083759551 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164763096517 0.0996497079465 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742071717841 0.0662205650399 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199497242753 0.162205337803 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0613331581059 0.0443174109184 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 13.3589403974 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 53.8541721854 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 5.55761589404 202% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.0289183223 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.2367328918 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.42419426049 97% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 63.6247240618 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 10.7273730684 144% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.498013245 133% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.2008830022 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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