The reading passage and lecture are both discussing about reading less literature ,novels and poems however the lecturer in casting doubt on this opinion in different ways. The lecturer is telling the reasons why the new culture reads less because they have different other ways to inspire and to be intellectually stimulated.
First, the lecturer thinks that books and novels are not the only way that stimulate our brain and she states that since culture has been changed movies and songs are used instead. The reading states that literature encourages us to exercise our imaginations, empathize with others, and expand our understanding of language.
Moreover, the lecturer states that it is not the writer's or the author's fault, since the author has less money to product books.
On the other hand the reading passage states that our literature today are usually superficial poorly written, and intellectually undemanding.
Furthermore, she states that authors have less support nowadays. Modern literature is more difficult to understand.This refutes the idea of writer which demonstrates there are many talented writers today, but they lack an audience.
Essay evaluation report
flaws:
No. of Words: 182 250 //need more content from lecture
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 20 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 8 12
No. of Words: 182 250
No. of Characters: 959 1200
No. of Different Words: 110 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.673 4.2
Average Word Length: 5.269 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.662 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 73 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 58 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 33 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 21 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.75 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.359 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.75 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.449 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.725 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.175 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 82, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...discussing about reading less literature ,novels and poems however the lecturer in...
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Line 9, column 116, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...erature is more difficult to understand.This refutes the idea of writer which demons...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.257575757576 0.261695866417 98% => OK
Verbs: 0.20202020202 0.158904122519 127% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0757575757576 0.0723426182421 105% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0555555555556 0.0435111971325 128% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0505050505051 0.0277247811725 182% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0909090909091 0.128828473217 71% => OK
Participles: 0.0454545454545 0.0370669169778 123% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.81955305497 2.5805825403 109% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0252525252525 0.0208969081088 121% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00154638098197 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0909090909091 0.128158765124 71% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.0158828679856 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.010101010101 0.0114777025283 88% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1167.0 1645.83664459 71% => OK
No of words: 181.0 271.125827815 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.44751381215 6.08160592843 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 4.04852973271 91% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.425414364641 0.374372842146 114% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.331491712707 0.287516216867 115% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.182320441989 0.187439937562 97% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.138121546961 0.113142543107 122% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81955305497 2.5805825403 109% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 145.348785872 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602209944751 0.539623497131 112% => OK
Word variations: 55.8457601952 53.8517498576 104% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 13.0529801325 61% => OK
Sentence length: 22.625 21.7502111507 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.10278581 49.3711431718 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.875 132.220823453 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.625 21.7502111507 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.878197800319 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.39072847682 59% => OK
Readability: 55.7741712707 50.5018328374 110% => OK
Elegance: 1.27868852459 1.90840788429 67% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.60917710233 0.549887131256 111% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.122266667607 0.142949733639 86% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0628978172408 0.0787303798458 80% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.766017462107 0.631733273073 121% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.184157328868 0.139662658121 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.30200980461 0.266732575781 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111072785579 0.103435571967 107% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.234967379224 0.414875509568 57% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0546940116457 0.0530846634433 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.373455513633 0.40443939384 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431651986032 0.0528353158467 82% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.26048565121 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 3.49668874172 143% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.62251655629 83% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 3.1766004415 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 8.0 10.2958057395 78% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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