The article states that there are some ways to solve the extinction of Torreya Taxifoha and provide three reasons of support. However, the professor explains that none of these ways is successful solution to prevent decline of Torreya and refute each of the author's reasons.
First, the reading state that returning Torreya to the same location where it survived for a long time, it needs to survive microclimate which used to be found in Northrend part of Florida, This microclimate is wetter and cooler than the surrounding region that helps the Torrey to survive thousand of years. The professor refutes this point, he states that the microclimate areas are strongly affected by the change of the climate; it could be because of the global warming and wetness of Florida that leads the Torreya not survive for a long time and anywhere.
Second, the article claims that moving the Torreya to completely different location, when the human would simply be helping Torreya return to an environmental again which is known as assisted migration. Torreya seeds have been grown and planted in forest further North Florida. However, the professor states that assisted migration has a negative effect on the environment, causes extinction many plants. When the human helped another plant like Black Locus Tree to relocate north that causes extinction and killing of many original trees.
Third, the reading claims that retaining the Torreya in the research center, so, the scientists can protect the species and conduct research on Torreya. The professor says that this claim is problematic; he explains that research center is not the solution since they are captured in the center and can not resist the diseases. To survive the diseases, it needs to be large and genetic diverse. The research center can not provide these characters to them. So, they can not survive the diseases.
Essay evaluation report
the professor explains that none of these ways is successful solution to prevent decline of Torreya and refute each of the author's reasons.
the professor explains that none of these ways is successful solution to prevent decline of Torreya and refutes each of the author's reasons.
the reading state that
the reading states that
moving the Torreya to completely different location, when the human would simply be helping Torreya return to an environmental again which is known as assisted migration.
Description: what is the verb for 'moving the Torreya '? can you re-write this sentence?
assisted migration has a negative effect on the environment, causes extinction many plants
assisted migration has a negative effect on the environment, and causes extinction many plants
assisted migration has a negative effect on the environment to cause extinction many plants
assisted migration has a negative effect on the environment which causes extinction many plants
flaws:
No. of Words: 307 250
Write the essay in 20 minutes.
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2 //pay attention to the structure of a sentence
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 22 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 13 12
No. of Words: 307 250
No. of Characters: 1539 1200
No. of Different Words: 157 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.186 4.2
Average Word Length: 5.013 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.456 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 122 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 95 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 50 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 24 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 23.615 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 12.677 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.462 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.354 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.611 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.133 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...refute each of the authors reasons. First, the reading state that returning ...
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Line 3, column 296, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a thousand'.
Suggestion: a thousand
...region that helps the Torrey to survive thousand of years. The professor refutes this po...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...urvive for a long time and anywhere. Second, the article claims that moving t...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and killing of many original trees. Third, the reading claims that retaining...
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Line 7, column 502, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... So, they can not survive the diseases.
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'third']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.267857142857 0.261695866417 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.172619047619 0.158904122519 109% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0565476190476 0.0723426182421 78% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0446428571429 0.0435111971325 103% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0267857142857 0.0277247811725 97% => OK
Prepositions: 0.10119047619 0.128828473217 79% => OK
Participles: 0.0386904761905 0.0370669169778 104% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.52715834487 2.5805825403 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0357142857143 0.0208969081088 171% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00154638098197 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.130952380952 0.128158765124 102% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0178571428571 0.0158828679856 112% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0238095238095 0.0114777025283 207% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1903.0 1645.83664459 116% => OK
No of words: 307.0 271.125827815 113% => OK
Chars per words: 6.1986970684 6.08160592843 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.04852973271 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.413680781759 0.374372842146 110% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.319218241042 0.287516216867 111% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.188925081433 0.187439937562 101% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0944625407166 0.113142543107 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52715834487 2.5805825403 98% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 145.348785872 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521172638436 0.539623497131 97% => OK
Word variations: 53.1389878215 53.8517498576 99% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0529801325 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.6153846154 21.7502111507 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.4090724252 49.3711431718 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.384615385 132.220823453 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6153846154 21.7502111507 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.461538461538 0.878197800319 53% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 3.39072847682 147% => OK
Readability: 55.5372087196 50.5018328374 110% => OK
Elegance: 1.67073170732 1.90840788429 88% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.718400144696 0.549887131256 131% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.177510643232 0.142949733639 124% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.120269581816 0.0787303798458 153% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.652929225403 0.631733273073 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.175478693961 0.139662658121 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.335017679046 0.266732575781 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13632032905 0.103435571967 132% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.412368395105 0.414875509568 99% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0416374219756 0.0530846634433 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.528885222639 0.40443939384 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654878997604 0.0528353158467 124% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.26048565121 94% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 3.49668874172 172% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.62251655629 83% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 3.1766004415 31% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.2958057395 97% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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