The reading and the speaker discussing the debates about the benefits of genetic modification technology but in vary different ways.
Firstly, reading passage says that the genetic modification of trees, it makes the trees more resistant to the harmful organism such as virus. For example, in Hawaii they introduced the genetically modified papaya trees which is affected by the ring spot virus in earlier time but now the trees are well resistant the that virus and the result is good. But, the lecture argues this statement by saying that it make only resistant to specific virus what about other factor like climate, water resources and soil conditions changes there it cannot survive. Only species could survive is natural species which has capability to survive at any environmental conditions.
Secondly, reading suggests that this technique can facilitate the economic among the farmers so that they get it more benefits from investing into this procedure. Again, the speaker refutes this point by stating that in order to do so, the farmers has to put lots of effort and further they are supposed to pay lot of money to the company which causes more burden to the farmers.
Thirdly, reading explains that by using genetic modification they make the wild trees faster than it's nature. By doing so even though when we cut the trees for the developmental purposes fast growing of these trees compensate the lose and it is more beneficial to us. Still, the professor opposes this point by claiming that when it grows faster then it will be more competitive for the native species like competitive for the nutrients, water and soil resources. And eventually, the native species will extinct by doing so. So it is not for the ecology system.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...nt by saying that it make only resistant to specific virus what about other facto...
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...s which has capability to survive at any environmental conditions. Secondly,...
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... fast growing of these trees compensate the lose and it is more beneficial to us. Still,...
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Line 10, column 340, Rule ID: COMPARISONS_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'faster than'?
Suggestion: faster than
...is point by claiming that when it grows faster then it will be more competitive for the nat...
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Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
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Suggestion:
...o. So it is not for the ecology system.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'still', 'then', 'third', 'thirdly', 'well', 'as to', 'for example', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.227848101266 0.261695866417 87% => OK
Verbs: 0.158227848101 0.158904122519 100% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0791139240506 0.0723426182421 109% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0727848101266 0.0435111971325 167% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0474683544304 0.0277247811725 171% => OK
Prepositions: 0.126582278481 0.128828473217 98% => OK
Participles: 0.0474683544304 0.0370669169778 128% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.56121889565 2.5805825403 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0284810126582 0.0208969081088 136% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00154638098197 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.110759493671 0.128158765124 86% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0158227848101 0.0158828679856 100% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0221518987342 0.0114777025283 193% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1761.0 1645.83664459 107% => OK
No of words: 291.0 271.125827815 107% => OK
Chars per words: 6.05154639175 6.08160592843 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.04852973271 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.350515463918 0.374372842146 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.285223367698 0.287516216867 99% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.168384879725 0.187439937562 90% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.106529209622 0.113142543107 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56121889565 2.5805825403 99% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 145.348785872 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553264604811 0.539623497131 103% => OK
Word variations: 57.1664504682 53.8517498576 106% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0529801325 92% => OK
Sentence length: 24.25 21.7502111507 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.9218510451 49.3711431718 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.75 132.220823453 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 21.7502111507 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.25 0.878197800319 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 3.39072847682 177% => OK
Readability: 52.7723367698 50.5018328374 104% => OK
Elegance: 1.44318181818 1.90840788429 76% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.511612300838 0.549887131256 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.15975999827 0.142949733639 112% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0809287872063 0.0787303798458 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.621652045403 0.631733273073 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.184597099455 0.139662658121 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.225411967208 0.266732575781 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105071372112 0.103435571967 102% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.376554707166 0.414875509568 91% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.00614132991235 0.0530846634433 12% => Paragraphs are so close to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.345321523704 0.40443939384 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0861405111354 0.0528353158467 163% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.26048565121 94% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 3.49668874172 172% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.62251655629 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 3.1766004415 63% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.2958057395 97% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.