tpo27
The reading passage and lecture are both about whether it is true that surprisingly cold temperature is caused by certain factors. The reading strongly postulates that there were indisputably harsh winter and glacier raise larger in many specific areas and scientists doubt that what caused the little ice age. On the other hand, The listening adamantly delineates that the author's arguments are groundless because most researchers assert that these points a little bit out of date because of several compelling reasons.
First and foremost, According to the author of the excerpt that cool climate has been caused by ocean currents due to the fact that many glaciers melted and it caused a great deal of cold water into Gulf stream so the evidence conclusively proofs that freshwater contributed to creating the little ice age. Nonetheless, the professor offsets these points by declaring that the climate affected not only in America and Europe also in new Zealand and Southern areas so it is impossible to create it.
On top of this, The professor in the lecture elaborates by bringing up the point that if volcanic explosion influenced it, the characteristic of the eruption had to produce visual colour which people can easily notice it such as a colourful rainbow. However, there aren't any reports and news about this event even this is the eruption the volcano sends out a large amount of dust. these claims refute the author's indications about volcanic blast emits a great number of dark clouds and sulfur acids which can spread over areas and hinder the Earth's surface entirely.
The text lastly insists that dramatic reduction of the human population has caused the little ice age because if early people didn't use forest trees for their agriculture and other things for a while, during that time the trees absorb the pretty amount of greenhouse from the atmosphere and it leads to decrease temperature significantly. The speaker in the lecture counter these indications by asserting that long-term of freezing weather couldn't possibly the fault of humankind because there is inadequate time to the trees receive a lot of carbon dioxide from the air due to a dramatic increase of population.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 460, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
... researchers assert that these points a little bit out of date because of several compelli...
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Line 3, column 265, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: aren't
... as a colourful rainbow. However, there arent any reports and news about this event e...
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Line 3, column 381, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: These
...lcano sends out a large amount of dust. these claims refute the authors indications a...
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Line 4, column 127, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
... little ice age because if early people didnt use forest trees for their agriculture ...
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Line 4, column 440, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...ting that long-term of freezing weather couldnt possibly the fault of humankind because...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, lastly, nonetheless, so, while, in fact, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 7.30242825607 164% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 12.0772626932 124% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 22.412803532 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 30.3222958057 142% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1845.0 1373.03311258 134% => OK
No of words: 362.0 270.72406181 134% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09668508287 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.04702891845 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62951069322 2.5805825403 102% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 145.348785872 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577348066298 0.540411800872 107% => OK
syllable_count: 581.4 419.366225166 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 21.2450331126 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.1452902295 49.2860985944 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 184.5 110.228320801 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.2 21.698381199 167% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06452816374 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.361110073186 0.272083759551 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122021341257 0.0996497079465 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0960006474202 0.0662205650399 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190647172674 0.162205337803 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374831149627 0.0443174109184 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.7 13.3589403974 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.94 53.8541721854 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 5.55761589404 202% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.0289183223 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.2367328918 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.42419426049 113% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 63.6247240618 146% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.7273730684 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.498013245 156% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 11.2008830022 187% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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