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The reading an the lecture are both about Chevalier de Seingalt, which is about the accuracy of the his memoir. The author of the reading believes that he distorted or invented events in the memoir, but the lecture casts doubt on the claims made in the article. She thinks that there are reliable historical records and accurate document over this memoir.
First of all, the author claims that he was not very wealthy because he borrow many money from one merchant in Swiss. This point is challenged by the lecture. She says that if he get loan from a merchant, he surely need cash money. because he has many assets that he needs to convert them to cash.
Secondly, the authors states that Chevalier' record about converstion with famous writer is not accurate. He believes it was written many years after the conversation and it is impossible to remmeber anything in these converstions. This argument is rebutted by the lecture. She says he visit by famous write every night. Furthermore, she points out during living many years in valley he wrote down anything in their converstion, so it is not strange that he wrote anything.
Finally, the author mentions that escaping from prison by using metal to make hole is not true and it is only for enjoyable reading. The lecture, on the other hand, feels that there is best evidence for proving this. She puts forth the idea that reparing celling after this event is the best document for it and also other prisons have good rrelationship with him.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
The reading an the lecture are both about Chevalier de...
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Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'an' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: an; the
The reading an the lecture are both about Chevalier de Sei...
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Line 1, column 97, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'his'?
Suggestion: the; his
...eingalt, which is about the accuracy of the his memoir. The author of the reading belie...
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Line 3, column 37, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... First of all, the author claims that he was not very wealthy because he borro...
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Line 3, column 74, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'borrows'.
Suggestion: borrows
...hat he was not very wealthy because he borrow many money from one merchant in Swiss. ...
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Line 3, column 81, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
... was not very wealthy because he borrow many money from one merchant in Swiss. This ...
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Line 3, column 81, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun money seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much money', 'a good deal of money'.
Suggestion: much money; a good deal of money
... was not very wealthy because he borrow many money from one merchant in Swiss. This point ...
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Line 3, column 181, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gets'.
Suggestion: gets
...ged by the lecture. She says that if he get loan from a merchant, he surely need ca...
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Line 3, column 234, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Because
... a merchant, he surely need cash money. because he has many assets that he needs to con...
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Line 3, column 234, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... a merchant, he surely need cash money. because he has many assets that he needs to con...
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Line 5, column 286, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'visits'.
Suggestion: visits
...is rebutted by the lecture. She says he visit by famous write every night. Furthermor...
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Line 7, column 183, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the best'.
Suggestion: is the best
...re, on the other hand, feels that there is best evidence for proving this. She puts for...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'furthermore', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'first of all', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.221052631579 0.261695866417 84% => OK
Verbs: 0.168421052632 0.158904122519 106% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0771929824561 0.0723426182421 107% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0385964912281 0.0435111971325 89% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0877192982456 0.0277247811725 316% => OK
Prepositions: 0.150877192982 0.128828473217 117% => OK
Participles: 0.0385964912281 0.0370669169778 104% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.41805340068 2.5805825403 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0140350877193 0.0208969081088 67% => OK
Particles: 0.00701754385965 0.00154638098197 454% => OK
Determiners: 0.105263157895 0.128158765124 82% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.0158828679856 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00701754385965 0.0114777025283 61% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1501.0 1645.83664459 91% => OK
No of words: 260.0 271.125827815 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.77307692308 6.08160592843 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.04852973271 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.319230769231 0.374372842146 85% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.230769230769 0.287516216867 80% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.161538461538 0.187439937562 86% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0692307692308 0.113142543107 61% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41805340068 2.5805825403 94% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 145.348785872 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576923076923 0.539623497131 107% => OK
Word variations: 58.9522294571 53.8517498576 109% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0529801325 115% => OK
Sentence length: 17.3333333333 21.7502111507 80% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.06637478 49.3711431718 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.066666667 132.220823453 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 21.7502111507 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.733333333333 0.878197800319 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 3.39072847682 354% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 40.4102564103 50.5018328374 80% => OK
Elegance: 1.39285714286 1.90840788429 73% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.549887131256 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.101074279813 0.142949733639 71% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.100331180324 0.0787303798458 127% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.551205544207 0.631733273073 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.189359992815 0.139662658121 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.266732575781 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.103435571967 0% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.285706633588 0.414875509568 69% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0421124941859 0.0530846634433 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.40443939384 0% => The content is off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0528353158467 0% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.26048565121 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 3.49668874172 86% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.62251655629 110% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 3.1766004415 126% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 10.2958057395 107% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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