Dear Sir,
I hope you will be fine. I need a some suggestions from you. Actually i got vacations of about one and a half week in next month . I had a plan to spend it there. So i had a plan to visit Northern areas of pakistan. I am going there with my wife and two kids.
you give me the information about the weather of that area. so that we will do packing according to that. and u also give me informations about the events which are expected to be in next month. My kids are very naughty. Both are boys. they have aloot of energy. So you must tell me the things like activities which kids can do there. Elder one is 10 years old and the younger one is of 8 years old.
I heard aloot about your centre and i think it must be helpful for us. Its must be our memorable trip.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...d a some suggestions from you. Actually i got vacations of about one and a half w...
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Suggestion: .
... about one and a half week in next month . I had a plan to spend it there. So i ha...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...th . I had a plan to spend it there. So i had a plan to visit Northern areas of p...
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...going there with my wife and two kids. you give me the information about the w...
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...g there with my wife and two kids. you give me the information about the weath...
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Suggestion: So
...rmation about the weather of that area. so that we will do packing according to th...
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Line 5, column 62, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “so that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...rmation about the weather of that area. so that we will do packing according to that. a...
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...t we will do packing according to that. and u also give me informations about the e...
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...y kids are very naughty. Both are boys. they have aloot of energy. So you must tell ...
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Line 7, column 37, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... I heard aloot about your centre and i think it must be helpful for us. Its mu...
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Line 7, column 72, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
... and i think it must be helpful for us. Its must be our memorable trip.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, if, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 626.0 937.175257732 67% => OK
No of words: 158.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 3.96202531646 4.54256449028 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.1645456113 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632911392405 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 197.1 290.88556701 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 9.0 16.3608247423 55% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.177338774 44.8134815571 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 39.125 76.5299724578 51% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 9.875 16.8248392259 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.9375 4.34317383033 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 3.94845360825 304% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14434483252 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0423504661 0.0766984524023 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520301604511 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0922971268746 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0197045995147 0.0580467560999 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 2.2 8.37731958763 26% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 96.18 70.7449484536 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 2.1 7.45979381443 28% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 4.21 8.71597938144 48% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.08 7.59969072165 80% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 41.2886597938 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 8.62886597938 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 5.6 8.54432989691 66% => OK
text_standard: 4.0 8.15463917526 49% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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