East or West, home is best. Do you agree or disagree with this saying?
(This is a SPEAKING topic)
East or West, home is best. This saying means no matter how far away you are, your home is always the last and best place for you to return. No one can deny the role of home because of 3 basic reasons:
To begin with, what does home mean? Many people say that homes is a mixture between matrimony and blood-relationship. But what about those who are not related with their parents and relatives? Orphanage children and the old-aged in nursing home, for instance. Home, known as family, therefore, is not a place where you were born but where you are unconditionally loved and cared. My own experience demonstrates this concept. When I was in high school, I had lots of friends. We went shopping and travelled, and studied together. Not until I got into trouble did they go away immediately. My parents always stood by me and took my mind off it at that time. And I realized home is crucial for people's growth.
Secondly, home is a place where you are accepted no matter who you are and what you've done. You are a black sheep? Or a loser? You are left out in the cold. Don't worry about it. Your family never leaves you alone. In the past I heard a story about a man who used to be behind bars. But then he tried to make up for what he had done. In the long run his family is still by him in spite of being blamed and cursed. What a generous love!
Finally, in civics book there is a meaningful sentence: " if society is as a body, families are cells inside". Positive cells keep a body healthy as well as happy and useful families help society developing.
In conclusion, I totally agree with the saying: "East or West, home is best". We have many places to arrive but we have only a place to return. It is our home. Let's cherish and behave kindly to our family.
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...only a place to return. It is our home. Lets cherish and behave kindly to our family...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in spite of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.38738738739 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49001287709 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594594594595 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 16.0721442886 174% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.6809522942 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 52.1785714286 106.682146367 49% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.8928571429 20.7667163134 57% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.89285714286 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 3.4128256513 381% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269638567316 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665734643396 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0922914001539 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144596537954 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104270912347 0.056905535591 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.2 13.0946893788 40% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 50.2224549098 154% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 11.3001002004 46% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.29 12.4159519038 59% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.93 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.33 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.