Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends.
What are important things with you? Family, friends, money or other things?
Most of people agree that friend is really important with their life. You are really happy if you have true friends. With true friend you can share everything together. If you happy they will happy with you, and when you really tired they always near you and make you felling happy.
Depend on your personality, your life and your work you can meet and make friend with many person and some of them may become true friends. To become true friends you need time to know hobbies, opinion of other and sometime you need some challenge because a friend in need is a friend indeed. When you overcome challengers together you will become true friends.
Somebody thinks the ability to maintain friendships with small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than ability to make new friends.
I agree that you are not easy to have true friend and I proud of my friendships with my friends. To develop your friendship you need attention, friendly and time to together. And if you have too many friend you will hardly to attention all of them. So I think is small number true friend is reasonable.
But I think make friends with everybody is good, too. You don’t have to become close friend but you may become friendly and good friend. If You can ready to help and gentle with everybody who meet you, they will help you everywhere you need their help
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the people') or simply say ''Most people''.
Suggestion: Most of the people; Most people
...y, friends, money or other things? Most of people agree that friend is really important w...
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Line 9, column 87, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun person seems to be countable; consider using: 'many people', 'many persons'.
Suggestion: many people; many persons
... work you can meet and make friend with many person and some of them may become true friend...
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Line 9, column 294, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...se a friend in need is a friend indeed. When you overcome challengers together you w...
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Line 13, column 93, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...with small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than ab...
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Line 13, column 174, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...iness than ability to make new friends. I agree that you are not easy to have tr...
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Line 17, column 196, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun friend seems to be countable; consider using: 'many friends'.
Suggestion: many friends
...d time to together. And if you have too many friend you will hardly to attention all of the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, really, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1227.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71923076923 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25045688984 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 176.041082164 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.453846153846 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 357.3 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.7153365651 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.1764705882 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2941176471 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.94117647059 7.06120827912 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321753441163 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14024839095 0.084324248473 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.141135865028 0.0667982634062 211% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24080050561 0.151304729494 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.198179088704 0.056905535591 348% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.0946893788 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.5 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.66 8.58950901804 66% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 78.4519038076 27% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.7795591182 56% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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