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Dear Jane,
I am so excited when receive your letter last week. You talked about many interesting and humorous stories and I felt it is so great. Today, I am writing to tell you about the best favorite day of my week and why I always choose that day. Basically, my week is mostly simple and boring. I usually go to school, do homework and spend a little time relaxing my mind. However, Thursday is the best day in my week because on that day I could join a lot of activities at school, especially each week has different activities. I attend a club at school and we organize many games, discussions, or trips for members. We set the rule Thursday is a day that we meet each other and organize activities so it is a day that makes me feel different things in my boring week. I have trips to amazing places, going camping, hiking, or opening a game competition about any topic that people at school have interested in. I also learn a lot of soft skills such as teamwork, presentation, or debating. This brings for me many benefits ranging from knowledge, skills to appropriate gestures and attitudes when treat to everyone. Therefore, Thursday is an interesting day I always expect of the week. Thank you for listening to my thoughts.
Please let me know your favorite day of the week. I wait for your letter.
Love,
Thuy
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, therefore, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1093.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55416666667 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63150978528 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570833333333 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 338.4 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.7316755317 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.8666666667 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.73333333333 7.06120827912 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.244688304435 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.084324248473 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.151304729494 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 13.0946893788 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.93 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 78.4519038076 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 0.67 Out of 6
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