Are famous people treated unfairly by the media? Should they be given more privacy, or is the price of their fame an invasion into their private lives?
Every famous people have or will have an experience of being behaved unfairly by the media in some parts of their life. This essay will discuss the behaviours of the media with celebrities and whether stardoms need privacy or not.
Most of the stardoms experience different level of misdemeanours from the media during their career-journey. The media ask or capture the activities of the celebrities without considering the consequences of the news published on their life and society. For instance, in a survey conducted among the famous people from different professions, all of them responded that they do not have privacy and every activities come in news coverage being exaggerated.
Every individual has right to privacy. It should be up to the individual what to share and what not. If confidential matters of anybody come to public, obviously it tortures them, whose privacy being invaded. In a hospital record, most of stardoms are found taking depression pills and the main reason behind the depression is lack of privacy, media covering every type of activities of their life.
In a nutshell, if media take consequences of the news coverage before intruding others matters, it will provide more privacy to stardoms and create an efficient environment to work which will be more productive.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 232, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the stardoms') or simply say ''most stardoms''.
Suggestion: most of the stardoms; most stardoms
...cy being invaded. In a hospital record, most of stardoms are found taking depression pills and t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1103.0 1207.87684729 91% => OK
No of words: 211.0 242.827586207 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22748815166 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89397717399 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 139.433497537 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554502369668 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 350.1 379.143842365 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.7937952692 50.4703680194 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.3 104.977214359 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 7.25397266985 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253523920447 0.242375264174 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0963112683313 0.0925447433944 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0604371021935 0.071462118173 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152160420278 0.151781067708 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335853489906 0.0609392437508 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 12.6369458128 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 55.0591133005 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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