It is irrefutable to say that the advertisement plays a vital role in promoting brands. Nowadays, the advertisement is becoming an essential part of the business world, which attracted the numerous controversies from the public. It can be strongly agreed that advertisement is a good source of making the people aware about a specific product, while on the other hand stands a perspective that it can influence the people in the wrong way. This essay will further elaborate on both the sides and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are advantages associated with the advertisements. The most preponderant one is that advertisement can make the people aware of the qualities of the product. As an illustration, the research in this area shows that people who buy the product by watching the advertisement always make a right choice to choose the better product. For this reason, the importance of advertisement in enhancing awareness among buyers about the product should not be ignored.
Notwithstanding, some people hold an opposing view and tend to believe that advertisement always represent the misleading information. Most of the television adds not only contains an inaccurate information but also guide the customers to buy low-quality products. For example, a recent survey done by the Sydney University revealed that 80 per cent of customers who bought the product by influencing from television adds usually received low-quality products. Hence, people should never believe the information provided in advertisements.
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that despite having some drawbacks, the role of advertisement in making the people aware of the qualities of the product is instrumental indeed.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, thus, while, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.75862068966 243% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1207.87684729 124% => OK
No of words: 277.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38628158845 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22208991828 2.71678728327 119% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 139.433497537 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537906137184 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 467.1 379.143842365 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 1.56157635468 384% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7232477479 50.4703680194 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.769230769 104.977214359 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3076923077 20.9669160288 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.30769230769 7.25397266985 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130134588505 0.242375264174 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535159208534 0.0925447433944 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.03900149817 0.071462118173 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0829192208928 0.151781067708 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.041142863756 0.0609392437508 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 11.5310837438 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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