Undoubtedly, in these days, it is an irrefutable fact that the problem of environment pollution is a major concern among many people in our society. While it threatens to many living species including humans, it is not possible to point our finger to a single entity as government, private organisations and individuals. In this essay, I shall explain my point of view by analysing negative effects of environment pollution and suggest solutions to minimise it.
At present, many people believe there are several reasons why our environment is in danger and one of them is the toxic fumes that vehicles release. Similarly, releasing industrial waste to sea endangers sea-life. With regards to an article published by the Harvard University, it is revealed that deforesting is a major impact to environment pollution. Apart from that, individuals having less or no knowledge about the environment they live in, contribute to its problems.
Secondly, there are few ways to solve this: hosting awareness campaigns, organise community clean-up events, enforcing striker rules, providing incentive schemes, tax relief to individuals and organisations can be named as a few starting points.
While it is possible to believe major organizations and government should take initiative to resolve these issues; however, my opinion is that it should start from the bottom, from individuals. I would strongly recommend to start-up discussion groups in schools to make aware of environment from early age.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, while, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1269.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 233.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44635193133 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05575782396 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 139.433497537 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652360515021 0.580463131201 112% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 379.143842365 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0912139133 50.4703680194 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.9 104.977214359 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3 20.9669160288 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 7.25397266985 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142427646108 0.242375264174 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0484715398214 0.0925447433944 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0344252155565 0.071462118173 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0759379703569 0.151781067708 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0255511780431 0.0609392437508 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 12.6369458128 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 53.1260098522 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 11.5310837438 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.06 8.32886699507 121% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 55.0591133005 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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