These days, there is an ongoing debate between people about fast food and if it should be viewed as positive or negative impact to the people. While it is possible to claim that fast food provides a lot of problem to people, my view is that the disadvantages outweigh the advantages. In this essay, I shall explain my point of view by analysing both sides of the argument.
There are several reasons why fast food is considered to disadvantageous to people. One of them is that habit of fast food can cause higher level of obesity, diabetes, and cardio-vascular disease. It can also be argued that it has lack of nutrition so that it does not provide any nourishment to body. It should also be taken into account that fast food contains harmful food additives and preservatives to increase the taste and texture.
Those who support fast food have a different view and say that it can actually be a good thing. Firstly, it is claimed that fast food is cheaper than homemade meals and dine-in restaurants.
While there are strong arguments on both sides of the case, my opinion is that fast food is detrimental to human health. I would strongly recommend that home made meals are good for human health.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 198, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun problem seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of problems'.
Suggestion: a lot of problems
...ssible to claim that fast food provides a lot of problem to people, my view is that the disadvan...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, firstly, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 31.9359605911 72% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 998.0 1207.87684729 83% => OK
No of words: 212.0 242.827586207 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70754716981 5.00649968141 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65124553438 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 139.433497537 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580188679245 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 379.143842365 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.6157635468 195% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.7933584643 50.4703680194 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.7272727273 104.977214359 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2727272727 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09090909091 7.25397266985 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347304660728 0.242375264174 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142898037878 0.0925447433944 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0825813779647 0.071462118173 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214923024192 0.151781067708 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351633882668 0.0609392437508 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 12.6369458128 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.1260098522 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 11.5310837438 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 55.0591133005 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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