Foreign languages should be made compulsory in the primary school. How far do you agree with the statement?

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Foreign languages should be made compulsory in the primary school. How far do you agree with the statement?

Surely there has been no time in the history where the lives of people have changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on the typically day reveals foreign languages should compulsory in primary school has been one of the most prominent topic in the contemporary discussion. People have always been intrigued to analyze and explain reason. People have always held some conflicting views on their issue. This essay will discuss both side of the argument.
To begin, foreign languages should be compulsory in the primary school. Firstly people know foreign languages they cannot face any problem when they go to abroad for study or something else. Secondly foreign languages tell about foreign culture which is important for us. For example when we go aboard if we know foreign languages and her culture than their people cannot face any problem for work.
On the other foreign languages is beneficial for us. Firstly, if all primary school only allow foreign languages than student only know about foreign languages that are not good for us. Secondly if they study only foreign book and cannot study our languages book they cannot know about our culture that is not good for us.
In conclusion I say that foreign languages are beneficial for us and school also provide our languages book with foreign languages book.

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Average: 5.5 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ges book with foreign languages book.
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 31.9359605911 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1108.0 1207.87684729 92% => OK
No of words: 218.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08256880734 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42852545402 2.71678728327 89% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 139.433497537 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504587155963 0.580463131201 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 341.1 379.143842365 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.1094655033 50.4703680194 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.2307692308 104.977214359 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7692307692 20.9669160288 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 7.25397266985 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249633083484 0.242375264174 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118687642422 0.0925447433944 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133954461275 0.071462118173 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171231368316 0.151781067708 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468170798533 0.0609392437508 77% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 12.6369458128 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.1260098522 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 8.32886699507 83% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 55.0591133005 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.5123152709 67% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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