Government should reduce their investment in arts, music and painting. Agree or disagree.
One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in government should reduce their investment in art, music, and painting. There is widespread of worry that this will only lead to a myriad of concerns in one's life. However, I don't entirely accept this and I will explain why in this essay.
First of all, there are many advantages that needed to be discussed, but one of them is that all these arts, music and paints can be categorized into the entertainment of mankind. People loved to entertain themself by relaxing after long periods of working. And also most of the pictures have deep meaning that nobody understands, so those must be protected by the government because it is priceless. As well as on music, the creator has some sort of ownership but sponsors are the real owners of many songs, therefore as democracies country government needs to involve the music industry to manage copyrights of tunes.
But, there are some do not believe in ar, music, and paints. They believe it is useless to waste money to secure them. But in my point of view, I think that the government should involve to secure art because they are the history of each of the natures and rhythm of their hart.
In conclusion, It's just to secure art, music, and painting because those are the past of our own and must be protected to see in the future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, therefore, well, i think, in conclusion, sort of, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1122.0 1207.87684729 93% => OK
No of words: 242.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63636363636 5.00649968141 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52779102729 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574380165289 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 352.8 379.143842365 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.931034482759 644% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8946408064 50.4703680194 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 104.977214359 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.90909090909 7.25397266985 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283784639382 0.242375264174 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0902763086498 0.0925447433944 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111807459569 0.071462118173 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154075254914 0.151781067708 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368426045671 0.0609392437508 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 12.6369458128 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 11.5310837438 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.32886699507 95% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 55.0591133005 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 61.0 Out of 90
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