If you are assigned to work on climate change what will you choose to focus on and why?
In recent decades, there has been a colossal upsurge in the amount of environmental degradation, with climate change being a pivotal one. There is a wide array of aspects that climate change entails. However, I would like to base my research on industrialisation, a key factor contributing to the deterioration of the ecosystem.
There are a myriad of arguments in favor of my stance. The most conspicuous one is that industries and factories pollute the environment by dumping harmful chemicals in the water and land which could result in giving birth to numerous dreadful diseases like Malaria, skin problem and many more. Not only do the factories make harmful effects to the environment, but they also lead to the health problem in humans, animals, and whole nature. Needless to say, all these demerits of industrialization have a far-reaching impact on environment and human’s health.
Another pivotal aspect of this argument is that the government need to apply stringent rules and regulation on factories so gas emission and waste material could be reduced. Hence, it is apparent that more research needs to be done on this topic in order to find solution for this soaring concern.
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that the role of a research project regarding climate change in dealing with this issue is instrumental indeed.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'myriads'?
Suggestion: myriads
...ation of the ecosystem. There are a myriad of arguments in favor of my stance. The...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1153.0 1207.87684729 95% => OK
No of words: 223.0 242.827586207 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17040358744 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03892316333 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 139.433497537 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632286995516 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 379.143842365 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8857543916 50.4703680194 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.3 104.977214359 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3 20.9669160288 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.25397266985 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0589370087924 0.242375264174 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0280295094318 0.0925447433944 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452379255907 0.071462118173 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.043008440093 0.151781067708 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446922420108 0.0609392437508 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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