It is argued that getting married before finishing school or getting a job is not a good choice. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some individuals feel that entering into marriage life prior completing educational years or securing a career is not the best option. I strongly agree to the foregoing argument due to financial stability and age of maturity. This essay will discuss my justifications for the stated reasons.
To begin with, students who are already married must take into account their capacity to earn a living. Several graduates are working very hard just to have a stable job and at the same time be financially ready once they decided to get married. Thus, being a pupil itself would not enable them to provide the basic needs of their family at that early stage because they are still supported by their parents.
Apart from this, newly-wedded couples who are still studying might encounter difficulties in handling responsibilities at work and also family matters. The time to be fully mature and to behave like adults comes with the right age. For this reason, development of mental and emotional state takes time and that would help people be prepared for the next level of their lives. Hence, it is indeed important to consider proper timing and mental condition when it comes to deciding for marriage.
To recapitulate, undergraduates must first establish a good income as well as to reach the right level of maturity before accepting matrimony. Perhaps, this consideration will far benefit the couple in their family’s future lives.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 200, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'adults'' or 'adult's'?
Suggestion: adults'; adult's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, if, so, still, thus, well, apart from, as to, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1209.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 235.0 242.827586207 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14468085106 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76935960978 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 139.433497537 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.689361702128 0.580463131201 119% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.3173034568 50.4703680194 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.75 104.977214359 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5833333333 20.9669160288 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58333333333 7.25397266985 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0559391226362 0.242375264174 23% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0190304642899 0.0925447433944 21% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.029679558999 0.071462118173 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0334662444447 0.151781067708 22% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.024743010816 0.0609392437508 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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