Many people think that successful people's accomplishment depend on the region where he come from, While other people think that it doesn't matter where person come from, if that person has will to succeed, he/she will triumph. What do you think?
Nowadays, many people think that those individuals who are come from good region only they can achieve good success in life. While, some individuals says that it doesn't matter from where person come it depends upon her work. I will shed light on both views in upcoming paragraph and discuss my opinion before appropriate conclusion.
To begin with, many individuals think that to achieve high success is depend upon on you when you work hard then you earn more or when your brain was working sharply then also you earn better it doesn't mean person come from where the every company see their work then give him good pay. Every person need to work hard for achieve good success in life.
On the other hand every country have some porch state or city. For example, in India the Mumbai, Delhi are the porch city. So when someone go to find job in other state and they said i am come from mumbai. Another person think very good about them. Because in these types of city everyone are well educated so they will high success in low period of time. For some people region is depend to achieve high success nowadays.
All in all, every coin has two sides, this essay was also containing both sides. But i think that all people are same so when you judge anyone judge from their work not from region.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...duals think that to achieve high success is depend upon on you when you work hard...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
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Message: The proper name in singular (Delhi) must be used with a third-person verb: 'is'.
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Message: The pronoun 'anyone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'judges'.
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...eople are same so when you judge anyone judge from their work not from region.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, well, while, for example, i think, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 20.9802955665 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 5.75862068966 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1067.0 1207.87684729 88% => OK
No of words: 235.0 242.827586207 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54042553191 5.00649968141 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.9226792081 2.71678728327 71% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 139.433497537 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557446808511 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 334.8 379.143842365 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.9596191167 50.4703680194 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.0769230769 104.977214359 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0769230769 20.9669160288 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07692307692 7.25397266985 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.33497536946 281% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323323804816 0.242375264174 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110467272719 0.0925447433944 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0852259158436 0.071462118173 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20218584083 0.151781067708 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.068061397532 0.0609392437508 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 12.6369458128 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 53.1260098522 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.9458128079 72% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 11.5310837438 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.75 8.32886699507 81% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 55.0591133005 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.