Media has a high influence on the way people in a society think Do you agree with this statement Provide some reasons to justify your answer

Human mind get influenced easily and today media becomes an integral part of our life, and it has a very high influence on thinking of the people. Let's discuss in detail why media has a high influence on society thinking. I strongly agree with this statement. In the following paragraphs will give my opinion in more detail.

To start with, there are different type of media we have like news media, social media, and print media from where people receive information about events happening all over the world. Media has a very mass coverage and any information get circulated very quickly and people start believing in it. For example, in bloomberge.com last year, a 10 years old news of Atlanta Airways about its bankruptcy resurfaced as breaking news by mistake that impacted its share and investors lost lots of money due to wrong news.

In addition to it, uneducated people gets more impacted by media reports as they are not able to analyse the news properly. Today most of the media interested in covering negative news instead of positive news because they want that more and more people start watching their news channel so they can earn more revenue.

At last as a conclusion, we can say that as discussed in the above paragraphs media has a very high influence on society and the way people analyse any event. Media can send a positive or negative message to a mass population very quickly.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, for example, in addition, to start with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 10.5418719212 19% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1170.0 1207.87684729 97% => OK
No of words: 243.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81481481481 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51961432897 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 139.433497537 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584362139918 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 378.9 379.143842365 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.8420144561 50.4703680194 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.363636364 104.977214359 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0909090909 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27272727273 7.25397266985 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219032342713 0.242375264174 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104365052657 0.0925447433944 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0865979110687 0.071462118173 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145628097566 0.151781067708 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0810595688616 0.0609392437508 133% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 11.5310837438 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 55.0591133005 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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