Nowadays, it is increasingly more difficult to maintain the right balance between work and other aspects of one’s life, such as leisure time with family members. How important do you think is this balance? Why do people find it hard to achieve?
The importance of work-life balance, which is frequently generated a great deal of heated debate, has recently become even more controversial. Some people believe that it is increasingly more difficult to maintain the right balance between work and other aspects of one's life, such as leisure time with family members. this essay will elaborate on how people find it hard to achieve and how this balance is important.
At the outset, there are various reasons why the balance between work and life is being struggled to obtain by most people but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that we are living in a busy world where people have to spend a lot of time at work to maintain their living status. According to a new study, ninety percent of people in London admit that they care about their career more than their family. Obviously, thriving in a career needs an enormous amount of time and effort because of high competition in today society. Thus, time for family is really limited and valuable.
Moving on to consider the significance of the balance between work and life, scientists believe that obtaining this status can help people to extend their longevity and live happier. it is indisputable that family is the core of society and it is also a place where individuals spiritually depend on. A new survey reveals that people who achieve this balance are more content and less stressful. Therefore, it is crucial to spend more time with our lovers to have a better life.
In conclusion, taking these points into account, in my personal perspective, I am inclined to believe that although the work-life balance is not seamless to gain, we should still understand how important it is and consider to have it.
- Large shopping malls are replacing small local shops in cities and towns. In your own experience, is it a positive development? 80
- Some people think that younger employees often have more skills, knowledge and motivation than the old employees. To what extent do you agree with it? Use your experience. 88
- Some people think that the design of buildings has effect, either positively or negatively, on where people work and live. To what extent you agree or disagree. 88
- Professional workers like doctors, nurses and teachers make a greater contribution to society and so should be paid more than sports and entertainment personalities. To what extent do you agree or disagree. 77
- Some people believe that the digital age has made us lazier, others claim that it has made us more knowledgeable. 77
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 267, Rule ID: ONES
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
...lance between work and other aspects of ones life, such as leisure time with family ...
Line 1, column 320, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
...ch as leisure time with family members. this essay will elaborate on how people find...
Line 3, column 184, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
...xtend their longevity and live happier. it is indisputable that family is the core...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, still, therefore, thus, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 20.9802955665 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 295.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85762711864 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59085080621 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 139.433497537 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572881355932 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 379.143842365 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.3020217412 50.4703680194 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.416666667 104.977214359 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5833333333 20.9669160288 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.08333333333 7.25397266985 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.440031662296 0.242375264174 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151835668686 0.0925447433944 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.147016382376 0.071462118173 206% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.265851823255 0.151781067708 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.173550672117 0.0609392437508 285% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
automated_readability_index: 13.8 12.6369458128 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.