Nowadays, the mass media including TV, radio and newspaper have become the essential part of our lives. What is your opinion?

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Nowadays, the mass media including TV, radio and newspaper have become the essential part of our lives. What is your opinion?

A matter of considerable controversy is the effect of mass communication and media on our lives. I agree that television, radio and newspapers have become a priority in our lives. This will be shown by looking at how mass media is the main source of news and entertainment.

Mass media, including TV and radio, is the main source of news. We can only know what is happening in the world and follow the economic trends through the mass media, hence make important decisions concerning our lives. For instance, The New York Times reported in march 2015 that after announcing in the news about the economic problem in the middle east, most investors avoided investing their money there and it dramatically affected the area. Thus, this makes it clear how mass media have important role in our daily decisions.

In addition to that, TV and radio programs have always been the main source of entertaiment in our homes. Moreover, they have great effect on people's behaviours. For example, a recent poll bu the UK govermnent found that 68% of house wives and children spend more time watching entertainment shows than doing other activities. Which shows how it can easily affect their behavior. Consequently, this clearly shows how mass media highly influences people's lives.

In conclusion, since the mass media now has become an imperative source of information, news and even entertainment, it is obvious that it's importance and effect on our lives is increasing dramatically every day. Hence, it is advised that communities start to use it wisely, to be able to avoid any negative ramifications.

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Average: 7.1 (3 votes)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 328, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ment shows than doing other activities. Which shows how it can easily affect their be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, hence, if, look, moreover, so, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1337.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 265.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04528301887 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84704414742 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596226415094 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5706666612 50.4703680194 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5 104.977214359 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9285714286 20.9669160288 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 7.25397266985 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32037091385 0.242375264174 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121564582681 0.0925447433944 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10569979639 0.071462118173 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19976266397 0.151781067708 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0897230793024 0.0609392437508 147% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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