Parents are responsible for their children’s behavior. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
These days, it has become a growing trend for parents to teach their children about behavior and way of life. As such, there are both merits and demerits to this trend, although I am of the opinion that the former outdo the latter.
At the outset, there is a myriad of argument in favor of my stance. The most conspicuous one is that in order to become well behave and decent, it is very important to learn the concept of these terms which includes behavior and manner. Thanks to parents who are responsible for the brought up of their child from birth to toddler. Not only can parents teach their children about way of living, but also can they encourage their child to behave in a good manner in front of every one.
There are, however, some pitfalls that can easily overwhelm the potential benefits of child behavior responsibility. The primary one stems from the fact that by imposing too many order on children in early age can results in increasing negativity in child brain, for instance hate, enemy and discrimination, parents can be responsible for all these factors. Hence, it is apparent why many are in favor of the topic.
In view of the above outlined arguments, one can conclude that the benefits of well behaved children because of parents are indeed to great to ignore.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 215, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'result'
Suggestion: result
...many order on children in early age can results in increasing negativity in child brain...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, well, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1069.0 1207.87684729 89% => OK
No of words: 227.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70925110132 5.00649968141 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47916271027 2.71678728327 91% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 139.433497537 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563876651982 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 337.5 379.143842365 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6679385805 50.4703680194 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.9 104.977214359 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7 20.9669160288 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3 7.25397266985 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217788959048 0.242375264174 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0836951701795 0.0925447433944 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793882454102 0.071462118173 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132146667088 0.151781067708 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374505701761 0.0609392437508 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 12.6369458128 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 11.5310837438 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 55.0591133005 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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