Que You need to study climate change Which aspect of climate change will you choose and why

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Que You need to study climate change. Which aspect of climate change will you choose and why?

It has long been a subject of discussion whether studying climate change or not. In my opinion, the former nation has several elements that deserve attention and i will explain why using pertinent arguments.
There are myriad of arguments in favor of my context, and the most conspicuous one lies in the fact that people should be extra careful with their decisions. For example, according to a recent survey done by the stand ford university, 45% people benefit from the above mentioned nation, whereas 30% people face disadvantages due to it. Hence, it is apparent why many citizen are in favor of above stance.
Another argument in support of my view is that governments worldwide have become more active in dealing with this situation. To illustrate, as per a recent academic research carried out by the Australian government, 60% citizens gained immensely from the proposed government reforms. They improved their exiting scenario tremendously and that paved the way for a better economic future. Therefore, not only will this make people more careful and pragmatic in their approach, but also will it lead to a better living standard.
From what has been discussed above, it is clear that the benefits of the given topic significantly outweigh the drawbacks. Lastly, in my opinion, it would be wise to say that climate change.

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Average: 8.2 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 163, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ral elements that deserve attention and i will explain why using pertinent argume...
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Line 2, column 362, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun citizen seems to be countable; consider using: 'many citizens'.
Suggestion: many citizens
...es due to it. Hence, it is apparent why many citizen are in favor of above stance. Another ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, lastly, so, therefore, whereas, for example, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1116.0 1207.87684729 92% => OK
No of words: 220.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07272727273 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70819082058 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663636363636 0.580463131201 114% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 379.143842365 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5206842314 50.4703680194 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.454545455 104.977214359 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.27272727273 7.25397266985 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105726326441 0.242375264174 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0434167578524 0.0925447433944 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672244534085 0.071462118173 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0749375080523 0.151781067708 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0762547155082 0.0609392437508 125% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 12.6369458128 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 82.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 74.5 Out of 90
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