Some people believe the purpose of education is to create future workforce and good members of society. Other people believe the purpose of education is to fulfill people's lives. What do you think is the purpose of education? give examples from your real world experience or news from other materials.
Nowadays, the purpose of education has become long-running dispute among people all around the world, which leads to a moot question" what is the main purpose of education?'. It is a widely held view that education is highly beneficial, whereas I tend to believe that one must carefully weigh up the pros and cons of it.
From a social point of view, education causes many advantageous for one who learns it. First and foremost is that education provides people a new insight to see the world. That is to say, just in higher education, individuals are able to broaden their horizons and help others with their valuable knowledge. In addition, there is no doubt that illiterate people in developing countries need more education to be good members of society.
In private terms, many students globally gain new education merely for their interest. needless to say that many people are interested to receive more and more new and modern science, so they are free to do this. for example, a group of profound researches, working at a prestigious university, conducted a longitudinal study to understand the relationship between education and successful people as well as development. Therefore, the result revealed that education is positively correlated with not only successful but also good people in society.
To recapitulate, I firmly believe that education can bring about
a revolution in individuals lives, and in any terms learning have positive points.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Needless
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Suggestion: For
...n science, so they are free to do this. for example, a group of profound researches...
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Suggestion:
...y believe that education can bring about a revolution in individuals lives, and i...
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to have'
Suggestion: to have
...iduals lives, and in any terms learning have positive points.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, so, therefore, well, whereas, for example, in addition, no doubt, as well as, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 5.75862068966 278% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1237.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 237.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2194092827 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97238142957 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 139.433497537 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62447257384 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7547152201 50.4703680194 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.454545455 104.977214359 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5454545455 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.25397266985 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.382058246366 0.242375264174 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131907964558 0.0925447433944 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.080781384528 0.071462118173 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180626116672 0.151781067708 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0930614878688 0.0609392437508 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 12.6369458128 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.