Some say that in today's world the value of humanities has been eclipsed by the necessity of preparing for specific wealth-producing careers, such as medicine. Discuss whether you think there is a role in today's changing world for the study of the humanities.
Recently, the phenomenon of the study of humanities and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that the matter of wealthy nations is highly beneficial, such an issue is regarded thoroughly as both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that human rights can be a plus, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
From a social standpoint, the value of humanities can provide the society with some noticeable effects which are rooted in the fact that the merits of social satisfaction, as well as career development, are inextricably bound up. According to my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered the important role of money and happiness. Had it not been for this discovery, I wouldn’t have managed to do so. Thus, beneficial ramifications of both social improvement and healthy societies apparently can be seen.
On the other hand, within the realm of science, wealth-producing careers might increase the consequences of threatening human beings. Moreover, the fundamental aspects of medical devices would relate to this reality that the demerits of expensive treatments pertain to underpaid jobs. As an example, some scientific research undertaken by a prestigious university has asserted that the downside of part-time employment is correlated negatively with family issues. Hence, it is correct to presume the preconceived notion of the fast-changing world.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of providing medicine far outweigh its drawbacks. Not only do the advantages of wealthy companies prove the significance of social welfare, but also pinpoint long-term implications.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 1207.87684729 129% => OK
No of words: 279.0 242.827586207 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.56989247312 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28761572542 2.71678728327 121% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 139.433497537 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655913978495 0.580463131201 113% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 379.143842365 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6010694185 50.4703680194 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.538461538 104.977214359 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4615384615 20.9669160288 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 7.25397266985 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108873078624 0.242375264174 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0340140938499 0.0925447433944 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0326910869226 0.071462118173 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0528288562997 0.151781067708 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0326806234517 0.0609392437508 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 12.6369458128 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 53.1260098522 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 11.5310837438 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.62 8.32886699507 128% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 55.0591133005 191% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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