Students with degree earn high salary than who doesn’t have an academic qualification. Therefore, some argue that they have to pay the full cost of their courses. Give your opinion?
The importance of students earning high salary having an academic qualification compared with people who doesn't have qualification was always a debatable topic. Some people argue that students drawing good amount have to pay full college fees. Others reject this notion and claim that leads to discrimination among students and all students should be treated equally. In my opinion, I completely agree that students who earn high salary have to pay full fees for their course. This essay would further elaborate both aspects with justifying reasons and thus lead to a plausible conclusion.
To start with, in fast growing competition world, education acts as medium to apply or get a new job. People with high degree and qualification will be given first preference by any organizations and companies. As these people are economically well settled in career they must pay entire course fee to college institutions. For instance, students who can afford to pay fees are depending on the government provided scholarships and benefits from them. There are people who are more intelligent but their financial situation may not support them to join and pay for the course fees.
On the other hand, some people argue that it leads to discrimination among students. Not all students are well settled and to reach respectable position in society they struggled a lot. Firstly, government has to bring policies for the students who cannot afford their fees. For instance, in Italy, government has introduced a new scheme for students those are not able to pay their fees due to their financial crisis. This example exemplifies us that government has to take certain steps to bring out hidden talents by providing support and helping them with financial fund may help them to reach their desired position in life.
According to the arguments aforementioned, one can reach out to conclusion that students who earn good salary has to pay full college fees leads to misunderstanding among students and further the education departments has to take certain actions and bring new policies for the students who are not well settled.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, so, thus, well, as to, for instance, in my opinion, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 5.94088669951 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 31.9359605911 138% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 5.75862068966 330% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1784.0 1207.87684729 148% => OK
No of words: 344.0 242.827586207 142% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18604651163 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 3.92707691288 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81747689274 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 139.433497537 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505813953488 0.580463131201 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 537.3 379.143842365 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.7952450931 50.4703680194 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.5 104.977214359 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 7.25397266985 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31330698965 0.242375264174 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11137970551 0.0925447433944 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0955581124554 0.071462118173 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199735570068 0.151781067708 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10687846262 0.0609392437508 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 12.6369458128 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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