For a successful company, selling products depends more on company's reputation or it depends more on if they provide discount and free offers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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For a successful company, selling products depends more on company's reputation or it depends more on if they provide discount and free offers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Recently, the phenomenon of selling a product and its profound impact has become a long-running dispute among the public. Although it is a widespread belief that companies' reputation is intrinsically rewarding, a fair number of academic researchers view buyers from their theoretical perspective. Nonetheless, I am inclined to believe that each business should carefully weigh up the pros and cons of the importance of company's reputation or free offers.
From a socioeconomic standpoint, selling products is inextricably bound up with big sales, which it is a deciding factor in both attracting potential buyers and brand recognition. For example, a prestigious university undertook a comprehensive study in 2015 to demonstrate the relationship between customers' value and business strategy as well as gaining market share. Even though the findings are inconsistent with those of previous studies, some conclusive evidence presented thus far support the contention that stimulating people to purchase is correlated negatively with not only customer service but also free offers.
In financial terms, a company's reputation is undoubtedly attributable to any business model, in that it would lead to making a profit, economic prosperity, and increasing market shares. According to my first-hand experience, a vivid illustration of such attributions is trustworthy companies, which is cause for concern since our civilized society has overlooked in taking potential buyers for granted. Hence, the dominant role of excellent customer service apparently can be seen.
To recapitulate, I firmly believe that the advantages of company's reputation are of more significance. However, the local authorities are recommended to amend some existing legislation to minimize undesirable side effects of providing discounts and free offers.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 82, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...duct and its profound impact has become a long-running dispute among the public. Although it i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, first, hence, however, if, look, nonetheless, so, thus, well, for example, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1561.0 1207.87684729 129% => OK
No of words: 268.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.82462686567 5.00649968141 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32590390402 2.71678728327 122% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 139.433497537 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664179104478 0.580463131201 114% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 379.143842365 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.57093596059 121% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 7.0 1.56157635468 448% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9717547751 50.4703680194 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.909090909 104.977214359 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3636363636 20.9669160288 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.81818181818 7.25397266985 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178435508711 0.242375264174 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612598835572 0.0925447433944 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437294145131 0.071462118173 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106952105142 0.151781067708 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0551045356502 0.0609392437508 90% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 12.6369458128 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 21.74 53.1260098522 41% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.9458128079 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.77 11.5310837438 145% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.84 8.32886699507 130% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 55.0591133005 185% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.94827586207 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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