Technological innovation has affected our lives.do you agree or disagree?
One of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is the colossal upsurge in technological rise. There is a widespread worry that this will only lead to a myriad of concerns in the society. This essay will present an overview of these consequences and suggest potential solutions.
On the one hand, critics may point out that the most significant benefits of advancement in technology is the availability of extra time. For example, mothers, unlike in the past, now have more time to spend with their families, as less time is spent doing the house chores, thanks to efficient household machineries.
On the other hand, there are numerous reason of arguments in favour of my stance. One of the predominant one is that these innovations have negative consequences for the community in various ways. Firstly, people are losing jobs because machines are increasingly taking over the role of humans, such as in the car manufacturing sectors. According to "Times Magazine December 2017 edition", the proportion of Americans employed in manufacturing has dropped from 30 per cents to 10 percent today. Secondly, a large part of the human population has lost enthusiasm because of technological dependency and is increasingly become lazy and less efficient.
lastly, in my opinion, the government of Australia is taking great initiative in educating its citizens against the negative impact of technology. citizens are being encouraged to spend a significant portion of their time in physical activity like games and exercise, in order to compensate for their computer reliance and addiction.
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that despite having some benefits, the drawbacks of technological innovation in the society are indeed too dire to ignore.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1224.0 1207.87684729 101% => OK
No of words: 229.0 242.827586207 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34497816594 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12515517053 2.71678728327 115% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637554585153 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5497556105 50.4703680194 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.272727273 104.977214359 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8181818182 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.36363636364 7.25397266985 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0745000908426 0.242375264174 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0235797385647 0.0925447433944 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0282114645244 0.071462118173 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0449258748555 0.151781067708 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0303899568387 0.0609392437508 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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