Essay topics:
tradition and commerce
Even though the fundamental essence of tradition and commerce conflict emphasizes the significance of complaint such as loosing traditional skills and creativity, the corresponding impacts of importing colorful costumes as well as the profitable industry are acknowledged, and the progressive move could be inferred evidently from the bringing money by tourists, which the potential implications of both preserving traditions and transforming of the bands and processions into businesses via government are presumed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, well, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 10.5418719212 28% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 0.0 20.9802955665 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 31.9359605911 25% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 445.0 1207.87684729 37% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 72.0 242.827586207 30% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.18055555556 5.00649968141 123% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.91295063024 3.92707691288 74% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.44531239065 2.71678728327 127% => OK
Unique words: 54.0 139.433497537 39% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.75 0.580463131201 129% => OK
syllable_count: 135.9 379.143842365 36% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.57093596059 121% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.6157635468 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.65517241379 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 12.6551724138 8% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 72.0 20.5024630542 351% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 50.4703680194 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 445.0 104.977214359 424% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 72.0 20.9669160288 343% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 29.0 7.25397266985 400% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.12807881773 24% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 6.9802955665 14% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287309743881 0.242375264174 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.287309743881 0.0925447433944 310% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.071462118173 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.287309743881 0.151781067708 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0609392437508 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 43.7 12.6369458128 346% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -26.98 53.1260098522 -51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.54236453202 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 34.9 10.9458128079 319% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 19.75 11.5310837438 171% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 14.44 8.32886699507 173% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 55.0591133005 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 47.0 9.94827586207 472% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.8 10.3980295567 296% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.5123152709 295% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 22.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 90
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