The use of newspaper will be less important in future. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Explain with reasons and examples.
Nowadays, the modern technologies than the newspapers have become a long-running dispute among the public all over the world, which leads to a moot question “whether using The Internet than the newspaper is more important or not?”. It is a widely held view that the Internet is highly beneficial, whereas I tend to believe that one must weigh up carefully the pros and cons of this issue.
To begin with, it is a common belief that the Internet plays a vital role in the world of cut-throat competition. Therefore, I express why I support this idea. First and foremost is that it is easy to access and we will be able to inform the latest news in terms of economic, medical, and politics in everywhere and whenever. Secondly, it can be argued that destruction of the environment for providing paper that leads to more forestation will be diminished. In addition to this information, it should be mentioned that the news broadcast in a short time from one country to another. A group of journalists, working at a prestigious organization conducted that the Internet can cover an extensive range of subject, while the newspaper cannot.
However, there is no doubt that using newspaper provides people with various positive points. It should be taken into account that reading newspaper is so convenience for the elderly, while using the Internet is excessively complicated for them. Moreover, it is quite clear that the news and subject that published in newspaper are more reliable than the Internet.
To recapitulate, I entirely agree that the Internet instead of the newspaper must be taken into consideration. Also the importance of the newspaper is being less than past. However, as every garden may have some weeds, the local authorities are recommended to enforce stricter legislation, and individuals are hoped to heighten their intellect.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 67, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ologies than the newspapers have become a long-running dispute among the public all over the w...
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Line 7, column 112, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...paper must be taken into consideration. Also the importance of the newspaper is bein...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas, while, in addition, no doubt, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 10.5418719212 199% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 5.94088669951 236% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 30.0 20.9802955665 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1562.0 1207.87684729 129% => OK
No of words: 305.0 242.827586207 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12131147541 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98150890051 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 139.433497537 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570491803279 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 379.143842365 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3099312178 50.4703680194 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.571428571 104.977214359 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7857142857 20.9669160288 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 7.25397266985 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22442963574 0.242375264174 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0768959046312 0.0925447433944 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539215087895 0.071462118173 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130826043316 0.151781067708 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0271766908583 0.0609392437508 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 55.0591133005 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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