“Vegetarianism is more ethical than eating meat.”
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with this statement. Support your point of view with reasons and/or examples from your own experience or observations.
Currently, the idea of vegetables over meat, in terms of ethics has sparked a global debate. Although the benefits of eating meat has proven to be consistently beneficial by various research, numerous people still maintain opposing views. In this essay, I will discuss reasons due to which I am inclined to believe that vegetarianism is more ethical and can have a positive impact.
From a social standpoint the slaughtering of animals for the need of humans is unethical in every aspect. When considering vegetables diets, factors such as animal brutality, premature slaughtering is out of the question, meaning it’s more ethical. Although the consumption of meat has proven to be more enriched in terms of protein, newer research suggests more productive alternatives. For example, in my own country Pakistan, organizations give injections to the animals so that they can extract more meat. Thus, the importance of vegetable meals is further emphasized by the cumulative advantage that results from vegetarianism.
On the other hand, a vegetable meal is more nourishing. The nutrients from vegetables have been considered as a important source from the human body. For instance, a survey conducted by a university showed that people who eat only vegetables are more active than meat eaters. Hence, it is plausible to perceive that eating vegetables is not only ethical but also beneficial for our human body.
In conclusion, although advantages discussed such as protein from meat can be beneficial but ethics outweigh these benefits. Thus, I believe that vegetables should be considered over meat as it has the potential to be more ethical and beneficial for our health.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 111, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...from vegetables have been considered as a important source from the human body. F...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, so, still, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1423.0 1207.87684729 118% => OK
No of words: 267.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32958801498 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00404885126 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565543071161 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 379.143842365 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.513636355 50.4703680194 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.642857143 104.977214359 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0714285714 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35714285714 7.25397266985 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181041328129 0.242375264174 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662957425521 0.0925447433944 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0357192171795 0.071462118173 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11763908977 0.151781067708 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0247442510391 0.0609392437508 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 11.5310837438 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 55.0591133005 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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