video communication with doctor help patients to any disease pros cons

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video communication with doctor help patients to any disease pros cons

The importance of The importance of video communication with doctor help patients to any disease pros cons which the datable has now become with more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while other reject this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my opinion the former proposition appears to be more rational. This essay will further elaborate both positive and negative effect of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.

There are myriad of reasons which will further explain this argument but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that any hospital doctors are very intelligent they very expire in communication. Another pivotal aspect of this argument is that the many doctors think very different and them treatment very different by other doctors and they to patients operate with video communication. Needless to say, all these merits stand in a good stead.

However there are some more pitfalls that negate this argument and which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of this trend but one of the most alarming one is that many people think wrong for this essay besides but some people think very good and they help to doctors. Hence it is apparent why are against this trend.

According to the argument aforementioned above, one can reach to a conclusion that the benefits of video communication with doctors help patients. are instrumental indeed. Nevertheless, its potential drawbacks should not be overlooked either.

which the datable has now become with more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while other reject this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my opinion the former proposition appears to be more rational. This essay will further elaborate both positive and negative effect of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.

There are myriad of reasons which will further explain this argument but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that any hospital doctors are very intelligent they very expire in communication. Another pivotal aspect of this argument is that the many doctors think very different and them treatment very different by other doctors and they to patients operate with video communication. Needless to say, all these merits stand in a good stead.

However there are some more pitfalls that negate this argument and which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of this trend but one of the most alarming one is that many people think wrong for this essay besides but some people think very good and they help to doctors. Hence it is apparent why are against this trend.

According to the argument aforementioned above, one can reach to a conclusion that the benefits of video communication with doctors help patients. are instrumental indeed. Nevertheless, its potential drawbacks should not be overlooked either.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...ients operate with video communication. Needless to say, all these merits stand ...
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...l these merits stand in a good stead. However there are some more pitfalls that negat...
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Suggestion: doctor
...people think very good and they help to doctors. Hence it is apparent why are against t...
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...ink very good and they help to doctors. Hence it is apparent why are against this tre...
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...mmunication with doctors help patients. are instrumental indeed. Nevertheless, its ...
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...s should not be overlooked either. which the datable has now become with more co...
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...ients operate with video communication. Needless to say, all these merits stand ...
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Suggestion: However,
...l these merits stand in a good stead. However there are some more pitfalls that negat...
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Line 15, column 273, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'doctor'.
Suggestion: doctor
...people think very good and they help to doctors. Hence it is apparent why are against t...
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Suggestion: Hence,
...ink very good and they help to doctors. Hence it is apparent why are against this tre...
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...mmunication with doctors help patients. are instrumental indeed. Nevertheless, its ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, hence, however, if, look, nevertheless, so, thus, while, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 10.5418719212 209% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 8.36945812808 215% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 18.0 5.94088669951 303% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 50.0 20.9802955665 238% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 31.9359605911 188% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 5.75862068966 434% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2574.0 1207.87684729 213% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 489.0 242.827586207 201% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26380368098 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70248278971 3.92707691288 120% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75998171922 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 139.433497537 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.276073619632 0.580463131201 48% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 798.3 379.143842365 211% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 12.6551724138 190% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.9434068347 50.4703680194 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.25 104.977214359 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.375 20.9669160288 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 7.25397266985 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.12807881773 194% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.33497536946 225% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 6.9802955665 186% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222883567772 0.242375264174 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689769089387 0.0925447433944 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122963827043 0.071462118173 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133008463219 0.151781067708 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0927174902174 0.0609392437508 152% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 12.6369458128 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.7 8.32886699507 80% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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