What are the advantages and disadvantages of mass media?
Surely, there has been no time in history where the lives of people have changed dramatically. A quick reflection on typical day reveals mass media has been the one of prominent topic in the contemporary discussion. People have always held some conflicting views on this. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument.
On the one hand side, there are uncountable advantages of mass media. First and foremost is that its great source of knowledge. People get the latest news in a very short time without ant distance barrier. Also, mass media provide us with entertainment. To cite an example as case in point music, videos and games could be another benefit to be considered. Moreover, mass media is a mode of communication with the help of internet we can communicate to anyone.
Probing further, mass media create health problems because people are watching television long time they lead to eye sight problem. However, children are spend more time at internet, which is not good for their because they do not play outdoor activities.
In conclusion, as every garden weed , this trend two has merits and demerits associated with, So one should know where to draw a line and take maximum advantages out of its disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, moreover, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1029.0 1207.87684729 85% => OK
No of words: 207.0 242.827586207 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97101449275 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72917325383 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.700483091787 0.580463131201 121% => OK
syllable_count: 326.7 379.143842365 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.5755587714 50.4703680194 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.1538461538 104.977214359 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9230769231 20.9669160288 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.76923076923 7.25397266985 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211557012329 0.242375264174 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0770650873025 0.0925447433944 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104079373044 0.071462118173 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108724377327 0.151781067708 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0727274590651 0.0609392437508 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 12.6369458128 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.1260098522 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 11.5310837438 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.94827586207 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 60.5 Out of 90
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